7/10 looks well done though I am not a fan of how purple/pink it is.
3/10 What is it a guy wrapping himself in 1980's rugs into front a a background that's so cloudy you cannot see it? the words underit don't make sense to me, how do you look "fly?" and the word I'ma seriously bothers me, its not a contraction and it doesn't make sense.
Also your picture is already 100 tall, you can't have anything more.