Looks alright, would replace the crit on bracers with Intellect, gloves mastery, but not a huge increase. Not sure why you are using 5 piece when your chest and helm are 384, could replace one of those with a valor one. Lavawalker on boots isn't exceptionally necessary, hit might be more suitable. Bottled wishes isn't that great whatsoever but maybe you used it for spine or something.
Edit - Buy the BoE crafted bracers also. They are a very large intellect increase.
DMC:V Is a bit outdated, but i guess thats your "luck"
I would say that you should think about your feet enchant aswell, and maybe get a run speed bonus, (Mastery+speed ench)
But the rest of it looks really good 7/10
Havnt been on here since DS came out thourght i would put my mage in here and see how im going with the rest of you guys Mage is Cállipygous US-Frostmorune Vision sorry cant post links more of a forum reader instead of poster. hope you like my transmog :P
Note: Im in the middle of reroling proffessions to tailoring/chanting theres why they are all so low
A little bit to much hit but beside of this your char looks fine... the transmog.. thumbs up!
I am not allowed to post links, too... so my mage is called Chipzcola on EU-Gorgonnash.
Apparently I got skipped.... But I'll do you. Your talent choices seem weird. Considering you've cleared everything on HC and are(?) still farming.
For H: Yor I love having scorch costing no mana since you'll end up being at 0 mana for a few times in the fight. You can still do damage with Scorch.
Also you have reforged out of crit to mastery? Looking at your other Reforges you seem not to be arcane reforged. Glyph of Mirror Image is a DPS-loss for Fire, (around 40dps or so if I recall correctly, this is very minor but something that won't take you long to change.)
Other than that, GL with drops while farming the content