I can already tell that this is going to derail again. Nonfic and Pat, continue your conversation in PM's or make a new thread to discuss it there. Otherwise, this bio is going to go back into a discussion about lore and NOT the bio in of itself / how to implement lore in the bio, and I will not have that. Either PM's or make a new thread, this is your final warning.
I'm just going to defend saying Lane can't be hot tempered and cunning in battle, look in literature and see a character like Odysseus, his fatal flaw was his ego and hot temper yet he was VERY intelligent and cunning. A character can make rash and hot tempered decisions yet still be intellgent, note not once did I say he was wise