Here is the very start of a short story I am currently writing I know it is very short but this is just to get a rough idea from people on how deep I should go with describing certain things such as the sword the celebration before hand and also the name as it is just a place holder.Any constructive feedback is well appreciated if you didn't like it do say why. Here it is:


Chapter 1:A proper farewell

It had been days since he had left his home for the tournament, His last night still running through his head, the mead, the women and his friends “A proper farewell” he thought to himself, A proper farewell for the Champion of Theramore.

His arm reached for the present that was given to him by the blacksmith, A large blade normally wielded by two hands but he could wield it well enough with one, the blade shone due to the treated fish oil the blacksmith had varnished it with, it would wear eventually but it had stopped the blade from rusting throughout the boat trip.