[Music] Electro House Lowerpug (Need feedback)

[Zoukan]

Hi guys,

I've been making music for like a month now. I've bought myself some FL studio, which is software to make music and bought myself some hardware. MIDI Keyboard, controllers etcetera. I named myself Lowerpug and just finished my second song. I'm making this thread to get some feedback on my music, on what I can do better. Please try to give me some constructive feedback. I want to learn.

My songs can be found on my soundcloud: http://soundcloud.com/lowerpug
My website: http://www.lowerpug.nl/
My facebook: http://www.facebook.com/LowerpugProductions

Looking forward to the replies!

Kind regards,

Lowerpug

[Vargur]

Well, it's nice to have an occupation/passion. I'm not into this sort of thing, but I never looked up to FruityLoops as a professional tool though.
That being said, the songs are nice (my genres other than old school house are progressive and some minimal )

I think you need to look at a song as poetry, you could improve upon that.

[Shinzai]

The two tracks are OK, but I would recommend advertising it as Minimalistic Progressive Trance, rather than Electro House, as it doesn't really have any of the faculties of Electro House.

Passion has a nice build at the start and a good flow, with little samples here and there to maintain interest and the spacey mid-section isn't bad either; It sounds like something from a DJ Tiesto set.

Acrylic's snare is a bit harsh on the ears and you may want to tone that down a bit, the hissing is very prominent over the chilled backing. Otherwise it's OK, but could probably do with a bit more flavour in the second half; Something to make it stand out a bit more.

[Zoukan]

Thanks for the feedback. About Acrylic: It was my first song and I kind of sucked at mastering, which is the art of mixing a track off to make it sound more full and complete.