A couple things that stand out to me, the helm and shoulders should be tier instead of offset pieces. I suppose it's possible he's been real unlucky with tier tokens but by this point in the tier that should be a priority. The Lightning-Imbued Chalice is awful compared to the valor trinket from Shado-pan Assault. It's a little weird to reforge out of spirit on the bracers and then put an int/mastery gem in the cloak. Last thing from armory and this may not be a huge deal but inscription and enchanting are none of the top three recommended holy pally professions. We would want blacksmithing and either alchemy or tailoring.
ON TO THE LOGS!
The Tortos log you linked is pretty bad. Under no conditions is LoD better on this fight than spamming EF everywhere. I've never had IH not be my top heal and having EF uptimes under 35% is flat unacceptable. Cooldown usage is terrible, holy shock usage is low by like half. I also don't understand 5 Hand of Freedoms here.