As some of you already know, I am writing a book. It's theme is dark fantasy. (Imagine dragons, knights, maidens in need, magic etc.) But also, mix in adult themes. Drugs(of some sort) sex and violence.
As I've described it the best way I can to friends and family "It's the story where the wolf rapes little red riding hood." Now, not saying that's what I am writing about, but it's a story where just that can happen.
Ahem, but enough about what my book is about. Some of you know that it's title is "A Word of Darkness" and can find it some places on the Internet already. However, it's not close to being finished, which brings me to why I am making this thread.
I am looking for feedback. While the story is nowhere close to being finished, still have some holes in the story, grammatic errors and such, it's vivid and rather entertaining.
So, I was hoping that some of you guys would be interested in reading it and giving me feedback on it. Feel free to let me know about all holes, grammatic errors or perhaps suggestions to how I could write it differently here and there, but... I can't promise that it will be tailored to every feedback. After all, it's -my- story.
Oh, and another little thing: Since I am so open about giving this story out to friends, family and unknown people, it has been copied. Like, someone taking my name away from it and said it's their own. I've made sure it's copyrighted and that it's not possible to steal it.
So... Yeah, that's all I think. Let me know if you'd like to read it and I'm happy for every kind of feedback. As long it's constructive
You can either give me a poke here on the forum by replying to the thread and I'll see if I can send it your way through the PM-system(if it allows files) if not - give me a note where you say you'd like to read it and include your email.
PS: I'd advice that people under 18 doesn't read it due to it's content. Also, English is far from my native tongue and started out being an assignment years ago at school. Wanting to really go into it and make an truly epic story, this is the results so far.
PSS: If this thread/request isn't allowed on the off-topic forum, I would really like to be given a note before it's deleted.