Oke not really. If you really gonna link rap songs at least post some with lyrics that uses more then 10 different words not even talking about the message.
I tend to enjoy music from almost every genre, dubstep and metal where you have a hard time understanding what they're saying is what I really can't get into.
Here a rap song that actually has a meaning. Your song is just a piece of crap a 1 year old could put together.