Short background story: I used to play Yu-Gi-Oh for a long time up till an year ago ( got a bit bored I guess ) though I still watch the animes. In one of its series ( 5D's for those who know it ) summoning chants were introduced ( basically short 2-4 row poems ) which introduced your ace/favourite monster and so on. That really inspired me and soon after I was already making my own short poems. I really really like some of them and I want to see what people can tell me, I want to know if they really are good or do I need to practise more.
( this one is my favourite, the first verse might remind you of green lantern oath but other than that its my very very own precious poem <3 )Searing will and raging spirit will burst at once!
Majestic flare light will shine upon and a super nova shall be born!
The blood will boil and the mind will shout! Burst, Red Nova Dragon!From the sky descend,
through the time transcend!
From the stars be born,
guide this world forlorn!
The brightest light - Starform Dragon!In the darkest night,
in a hopeless fight,
with hearts full of might,
we charge towards the future bright!
Monstrous strength infuses my soul,
just like ants in a dragon's maw,
my enemies I banish,
in eternal shadows they will vanish!
Phase into reality the moment I call,
you, incarnation of power raw!
[Insert cool name here hehe]In the darkness he hides,
the shadows he rides.
In hope he does not believe,
because in a dark world he does live.
His hatred I consume,
and upon my enemies triumph!
Emerge from the shadows,
Grapha, Dragon Lord of Dark World!Seething embers trigger my power,
as if a blooming flower,
it shall spread its colour,
bringing all the sorrow,
that the heart contains,
in the form of searing rains!Holy mark of the light is carved on his shoulder right!
His heart is full of might which like a newborn star is bright!
Shine upon, Divine Hieratic Dragon - Ennead!From the depths of my hatred he shall rise,
all enemies of mine in him will face demise!
Surface! Number 32: Shark Drake!
Here is a rather sad one imo, I never showed this to my friend and things kind of fixed with time so let's just enjoy the poem itself :P
Your ignorance I cannot stand.
Why won't you ever understand?
How many times need I repeat?
Your promise lasts (but) a heartbeat.
And much to your dismay,
It's you who is astray.
And much to your dismay,
Your rules I won't obey.
It's so easy to deny,
But this time I won't comply.
And without a second thought,
I leave you for the peace I've always sought!
Note: ALL of my poems are based on a specific situation or a theme. That's often quite the restriction which is the reason some of them don't sound good. I have more poems in my notepad file but these are my favourite ones. I get inspiration from listening to good music ( soundtracks most of the time ) and from certain events in the movies and animes I watch.
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Edit: Someone already downvoted Q_Q Atleast post a comment explaining what I could improve...