I'm completely new to WoW RP and I've decided to give it a shot. I've set up a very basic profile and backstory for my character. (It's actually more of a few points than a backstory) What you're about to read is probably very bad as I've got very little experience in RP and no experience at all in WoW RP. I'm looking for input on my character. Is the backstory I've written "acceptable"? Is my character a Mary Sue/bad cliche/conflicts with the lore?
Hakuro Wolfsong, Orc Shaman
- 23 years old
- Born as a Frostwolf
- A bit short (slightly below average) and slender for an orc, has a slightly more lean/athletic build than the average orc
- Prefers to have a little time alone but does enjoy company now and then
- Isn't very talkative with people he doesn't know very much
- Has his own Frostwolf companion
- Prefers melee combat to the use of shamanistic powers
- Still new as a shaman and lacks experience
- Was quite small for an orc during his childhood and was often beat up by the other orcs and regarded as weak
- A shaman saw potential in him and acted as his mentor during his teen years
- His mentor eventually passed away (still haven't decided how)
- Tattooed his mentor's wolf on his right arm to honor his mentor, who he has great respect for
- Eventually decided to travel the world and join a cause (the Horde) in order to discover himself, gain experiences and become a better Shaman
- His younger self was quite emotional while he is much more calm and composed as an adult
- He's a great fighter and brawler as an adult, once again as opposed to his younger self
- Definitely isn't an orc prone to bloodlust
- One of the few ways to get him angry is to insult his family or his mentor