for Notter: i'm not a ww pro but some things i could pick up: you often forget to prepot, you could use more touch of karmas on the slice to get dps out of it, anc you underuse fists of fury(if you compare to the r1 dps ww on gruul he has 9 uses in 3:50 you get 6 in nearly 6 minutes)
But most importantly: don't die!