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    World of Warcraft: Assault on Argus[expansion concept]

    With the announcement of legion. this concept will either be reworked or scraped(and some stuff added to a new one.)


    Opening Cinamatic:
    Dalaran City all the leaders have gathered from the horde, alliance, and the Neutral factions with their armies and civilians watching. They surround a kneeling Wrathion in chains as an orc walks around him. “The black whelp fears the legions return so he helped with certain events to try to save this planet,” The orc tells everyone. “His fear could have ended Azeroth long before the legion got here.” The orc stops and grabs Wrathion’s head pulling him up to face everyone. “do you have anything to say traitor?”
    “What I did was best for Azeroth,” Wrathion claims.
    “Yet your choices let to the blood of innocents,” someone says from the crowd and walks out to be seen. It’s a red hair troll. The orc lets go of wrathion and bows. “I saw enough with fear. I say we take the fight to the legion, enough waiting.”
    “And how do your propose we do that?” Varian asks “We don’t even know where to start.”
    “Yes we do and I have been preparing for this for years after talking to Velen about his vision,” The troll responds and turns back to the crowd. The crowd parts and the troll kneels. “The army of Light awaits your command Yrel.” Yrel walks up being escorted by Illidan, Alleria, and Turalyn.
    “Thank you Zanjin and Deltan,” Yrel speaks. “You both may stand down.” Suddenly dragons land on the buildings and 4 naaru ships appear in the sky. Zanjin smirks. “Azeroth has always been the small light surround by darkness. Now it shall become a beacon of hope and show that the legion can be beat. So lets take the fight to them.” Everyone nods. “ We shall assault the home world of the Draenei, Argus.”

    World of Warcraft: Assault on Argus

    The army of light is ready finally and has taken the fight to the legion by attacking the Draenei homeworld of Argus. Azeroth is no longer just a small light holding out against the Darkness, it is slowly become a beacon of hope and light against the darkness.

    Release Content.
    5 leveling zones, and 2 max level zones.
    10 Dungeons, 3 Raids, 4 world bosses, and return of Scenarios
    3 new battlegrounds and 3 new arenas
    Lots of quests and dailies
    Dynamic events
    New Class: Tinkers

    Preview of the starting zone intro and questing.

    Intro: Upon entering any major City, you are told to talk to a mage who will teleport you to Dalaran. Once in dalaran you must talk to Yrel. After talking to Yrel you head to a dragon who will fly you to a naaru ship, which takes you to Argus.

    Auro’san(zone 1, levels 1X0-1X2): The ships come out of warp, and decent onto argus. As the near ground the legion begins to attack. Yrel orders that the skyfire and other ships get out there to keep the legion from destroying them before they even get started. (Opening Cinematic for the Zone)
    Battle begins, On the Horde skyship known as Wolf of Draka, the 3 windrunner sister continue to shower the sky with arrows.
    The battle ends with the army of light pushing the legion back. They land, and Velen steps out. He is saddened by how Argus looks.
    The first quests are taking a few soldiers with you to clear and area then find materials to build a main base for the army. Most of the first zone is clearing out legion forces and building bases, doing that you learn a secret.

    Narvina(zone 2, levels 1X2-1X4): In this zone the forces pushed through and created a few bases. This zone you are tasked with recovering a lost base, cleaning out legion forces, and gathering info.

    Oro’sha(zone 3, levels 1X4-1X6): in this zone you finally learn the secret. In this zone there is a giant crystal mine and the legions has been using civilians from the different destroyed world to mine it. One of the tasks is to scout it and later in a scenario your liberate it.

    Marvei(zone 4, levels 1X6-1X8): More killing legion tasks. Just more of the same stuff

    Ver’shan(zone 5, levels 1X8-1X0): in this zone you learn the major players for the raids and learn Kil’Jaeden is on Argus.

    Tel’sana(Max Level PvE zone): in this zone players are tasks with building up an army to attack a legion base or fighting off a legion invasion.

    Razzaka(max level PvP zone): to keep the soldiers sharp the army of light has permitted War games between the horde and alliance. The zone objectives are random, it could be capture the flag, beat the other team at resource gathering, or simply siege the base.

    Dailies: the usually mix of kill stuff, collect something, scout something or rescue someone. Quests give rep and once you reach exalted to a faction on 1 character, the rep gains are increased by 100% on your alts. Also killing things in the area of the daily gives you small amount of rep too.

    Class: Tinker
    Race: Gnome, Dwarf, Draenei, Forsaken, Goblins, and Blood elves
    Roles: tank, dps, and healer
    We are going to into a hostile world and we are going to need machines to help back up our soldiers and I have just the right people for the job and their mechs.
    In a similar way to druids tinkers use a mech for each role. Mech=forms in this case.

    Siegebuster (tank): Melee mech cross between a goblin shredder and Blackfuse’s mech

    Castlecrasher (ranged dps): Range mech. Inspired by the Gnome spider mech with army cannons and missile pods on the back.

    Iron Maiden (heal spec): deploys healing generators, barrier generators, or healing streams to a target. Goblin shredder plus Gnome Spider minus the weapons

    Dynamic Events: Events are random

    Invasions: A base will be attacked at random by either a Boss or by a Legion army. An alert will go out to everyone on Argus 15 minutes before it happens. Gives people time to get there. If its an army once the invasion starts it acts like a scenario in a raid setting by fighting off waves of enemies until the commander shows up. If it’s a boss its treated like a world boss.
    Note: the loot you get depends on your level. For those raiders out there you have a chance at getting raid gear. Also there is a chance for everyone to get a mount or pet.

    Gathering resources: An alert will go out that something of value you will have been found. You are tasked with getting their before the legion does.

    Dungeons: 10 Quick preview of a few
    Siege of the Fel Forge: Lead by Varian you assault the Fel Forge to stop the production of more Fel Reavers.

    Assault the Corrupters: Lead by Yrel and Adir, you are task with stopping the legion from during their Slaves into fel infused minions.

    The Fel Well, Lead by Lady Liadrin and Adal you must rescue you the taken Naaru, Nal’li.

    The rest of the 7 dungeons are mix of assaulting key places and taking out legion Generals.


    Scenarios:
    Freeing the Mine:
    In this scenario you assault the mine to freeing the civilians from the legion and to stop the legion from using the crystals for fuel for their war machines. Varok Saurfang, Deltan, and Adir are helping. After you freeing the civilians you quickly overwhelmed by legion forces and Varok demands you take the civilians away while he stays back to give you time.

    The Love of a Sister:
    In this scenario the 3 windrunner sisters and you are scouting an area. You get spotted along the way and must hold out until help arrives. Once help arrives the legion pulls back. During the quick celebration a spell is sent towards Alleria but Sylvanas see this and moves her sister out of the way. She takes the hit instead.

    The Light always finds a way:
    In this Scenario you are with Tirion, Turalyn, and Adal. You are helping them find something that could be used against the legion. At some point you are separated from Tirion and are tasked with finding him. Once you find him you see him gives his life to stop a huge army of demons. Turalyn takes Ashbringer.

    Argus, the Elements and the Loa:
    In this scenario you are helping Zanjin, Cyromech, Poppy, and The Earthern ring free and purify elements of Argus. Sometime during the events a Zandalari Loa appears to help because she chose Zanjin has her champion. Also during the events Zanjin’s corehound companion is killed sending Zanjin into a furry and activating an artifact he stole from the thunder kings palace awhile ago. Zanjin, Poppy, and the female loa disappear towards the end. In the end only a dozen elementals got purified.

    There is 5 more scenarios, which range from having fun doing stupid things to killing a demon of slight importance.

    World bosses:
    Rangoth, The Gatekeeper: Brother to Mannaroth, Rangoth is task with protecting one of the three barrier generators.

    Raz’rend, The Gatekeeper: This Demonlord Guards another barrier generator. He loves the smell of blood,

    Navina, The ex-apprentice: She was Velen’s apprentice until she betrayed him for power from the legion.

    Raids:

    The Dark Citadel (5 bosses): Once a proud Eredar training school it has been twisted into an abomination it once was. You must deal with the Corrupted teachers. This raid has Adir, Velen, and Yrel in it.

    Siege of the Fel Well (4 bosses): After freeing the Naaru you return to well, in full force to complete destroy the well to stop the fel magics. Illidan, Tyrande, and Malfurion are here.

    The Fallen Capital (10 bosses): Once the Capital of the Eredar people, it now a monument to their fall. Lead by Thrall, Velen, Illidan, Deltan, Cyromech, and Yrel, you must destroy this place and take out Kil’Jaeden’s 3rd in command. Note: The final boss has Yrel, Illidan, and Cyromech helping.

    Battlegrounds:

    The Oro’Sha Mine (20): escort mine carts to gather points. Sometimes a gem will appear and if you mine it before the other team you get either an increase of points or increase of gain for a few minutes.

    The Crystal Valley (15): Capture the flag with a twist flag spawns in a random location and there is only 1 flag.

    Battle for Iron (20): take a base and resources gather. There will be buffs spread out in the map and one allows resources to be gathered faster (there is only 1 per every 5 minutes)

    Arenas:

    Dark Tide: Setting is in the center of a lava pit

    Skyfire arena: Setting inside the skyfire

    Iron Arena: Simple basic arena with Demons watching.

    Notable deaths at First:
    Varok Saurfang
    Tirion
    Sylvanas windrunner


    Notable new Characters:
    Adal Lightwrath, First orc Paladin by being infused with A’dal the Naaru, took a new name after become a paladin, was known as Dranis Iceaxel.
    Adir, Yrel’s second in command. Male Draenei mage.
    Dralana, Yrel’s 3rd in command. Female orc hunter
    Zanjin Wildspear, male troll hunter, founder of the army of light and now Yrel’s advisor, Ex-general of the horde
    Sera Wildspear, female Draenei Teenager, adopted daughter of Zanjin.
    Poppy Gearshield, Female gnome warrior
    Deltan male orc warrior and Zanjin’s 2nd and bodyguard
    Cyromech, male orc shaman and Deltan’s older brother
    around 20 more new characters.
    And a few more be added and named later in patches

    Zone Preview: Oro'sha(ore o sha)

    Once the crown jewel of the eredar research and development has become nothing but a wasteland of its former self. Its once beautiful fields have down turned into desert. The once between trees have withered and died leaving behind sells of their former greatness. The rivers have dried up. The crystal mine, which coves a fourth of the zone has, been corrupted and twisted by fel magics. The crystals are now harvested and broke down into fuel for the legions machines. Fel reavers patrol the whole zone in search of slaves trying to escape. The mountains have become twisted from corruption. Final the Fel Forge, it was once the main building for creating new crystal technology it has now become the main facility for producing Fel reavers and other nasty legion machines.

    Auro'san(Aura shawn): Once a beautiful rain forest, has now become the legions prison for demons found too insane for them to deal with. The once great river that flowed in the middle of the zone has now become a river of lava. A small second of the rain forest was called the Crystal Tree Valley is now become a fel infused power source for the insane demons in the zone. The once great trees in the zone has mostly dead out from fel magic. The surviving trees constantly burn from fel fire.

    Patch preview: Coming soon


    NOTICE: Some of the new characters are based off my own. Later patches it will be more originals and less of mine. Also more deaths coming. If you need me to expand upon something let me know.
    The main Cinamatic will be adjusted and the tinker class was a last minute add. so its rushed. i will flesh it out and post it at a later date in more detail.

    Upcoming changes and additions
    Main Cinematic fix(now stated twice that it was being done)
    Tinker class expanded(and adding a few tinkers)
    More Zone descriptions
    Zone Rework(Narvina)
    Dungeon rework(Siege of the Fel Forge)
    Short Story explaining the Army of Light
    Patch X.1

    Notice 2: Since people keep bring it up. By the time this take place Illidan has returned and demon hunters have been trained. There will be a faction of demon hunters added to Narvina
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    It's been an awfully long night, so I'll keep this short, and elaborate later.

    1. You essentially just made a massive Mary Sue out of your character (Chosen by a Loa)
    2. Yrel has no required buildup, or reason to be the leader of the Army of the Light.
    3. Yrel leading the Army of the Light ignores the fact that Anduin is supposed to do it, as prophesized by Velen.
    4. Yrel having the "Army of the Light" await her command, nearly instantly, was hamfisted as Hell.
    5. Orc Paladins. Lol.
    6. Most of your scenarios revolve around some sort of unnecessary sacrifice. That plot works occasionally, it's not going to work every time.
    7. You're not even a 1000th of the writer GRRM is, you can't pull off killing major characters so recklessly.
    8. They have legitimate future plans for Sylvanas, there's no reason to kill her off now in such a shitty manner.
    9. An arena with a lava pit sounds like aids. Conversely, it would finally unite the Arena forums in pure hatred for the map.
    10. Crystal Valley's RNG twist doesn't reward inherently good gameplay on the part of a BG team. It's a shit twist.
    11. Taming a Corehound is Mary Sue as fuck.
    12. "New class: Tinkers" smugface.jpg
    13. Zone names are awful, uninspired and (Similar to your last idea thread) feel utterly alien to Warcraft (in a bad way, not a "OH GEE GOLLY IT'S A AYYLMAO PLANET")
    14. Dalaran is no longer a neutral city, it's firmly in Alliance hands.
    15. What in the Hell is Illidan doing being not-dead
    16. Does he even have a reason for coming back then?
    17. Like seriously, did you even explain that at all?
    18. Does NOBODY in Dalaran have a problem with Illidan, the fucking betrayer coming back from the dead, and saying he's on team "Not Legion?"
    19. A character dying during a "quick celebration" is usually tacky. This case isn't an exception.
    20. We don't need new fanfic, Mary Sue characters. We need further development for existing characters.
    21. Visual aids are your friend.

    You're welcome.

    I'll be back to critique more and hop in the discussion later.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wildberry View Post
    It's been an awfully long night, so I'll keep this short, and elaborate later.

    1. You essentially just made a massive Mary Sue out of your character (Chosen by a Loa)
    2. Yrel has no required buildup, or reason to be the leader of the Army of the Light.
    3. Yrel leading the Army of the Light ignores the fact that Anduin is supposed to do it, as prophesized by Velen.
    4. Yrel having the "Army of the Light" await her command, nearly instantly, was hamfisted as Hell.
    5. Orc Paladins. Lol.
    6. Most of your scenarios revolve around some sort of unnecessary sacrifice. That plot works occasionally, it's not going to work every time.
    7. You're not even a 1000th of the writer GRRM is, you can't pull off killing major characters so recklessly.
    8. They have legitimate future plans for Sylvanas, there's no reason to kill her off now in such a shitty manner.
    9. An arena with a lava pit sounds like aids. Conversely, it would finally unite the Arena forums in pure hatred for the map.
    10. Crystal Valley's RNG twist doesn't reward inherently good gameplay on the part of a BG team. It's a shit twist.
    11. Taming a Corehound is Mary Sue as fuck.
    12. "New class: Tinkers" smugface.jpg
    13. Zone names are awful, uninspired and (Similar to your last idea thread) feel utterly alien to Warcraft (in a bad way, not a "OH GEE GOLLY IT'S A AYYLMAO PLANET")
    14. Dalaran is no longer a neutral city, it's firmly in Alliance hands.
    15. What in the Hell is Illidan doing being not-dead
    16. Does he even have a reason for coming back then?
    17. Like seriously, did you even explain that at all?
    18. Does NOBODY in Dalaran have a problem with Illidan, the fucking betrayer coming back from the dead, and saying he's on team "Not Legion?"
    19. A character dying during a "quick celebration" is usually tacky. This case isn't an exception.
    20. We don't need new fanfic, Mary Sue characters. We need further development for existing characters.
    21. Visual aids are your friend.

    You're welcome.

    I'll be back to critique more and hop in the discussion later.
    1. Vol'jin is a loa champion and you say he is shit. also i didnt even give this Loa a name(yet)
    2 and 4. i will write a small shorty explaining Yrel's rise to leader. The army of light have been planning this invasion for years.
    3. since no one really want Anduin to lead it i pick someone else.
    5. 1 orc paladin that came at the price of losing a a naaru.
    6. 3 out of 9 have people dying.
    7. its an assault on a legion planet. people are going to die even major characters
    8. how is sacrificing yourself to save your sister a shit way to go?
    9. no one actually falls into the lava.
    10. depends on the rewards
    11. hunters in game can do that now, your point is what now?
    12. last minute add. already pointed it out so its rushed.
    13. Draenei are aliens i tried for names that would sound somewhat Draenei
    14. its alliance but holding a neutral trial for Wrathion(which interrupted a party.
    15. blizzard said they were bringing him back. so this is all assuming they did.
    16. see 15
    17. see 15
    18. see 15
    19. your talking about sylvanas's death right? it happens get over it.
    20. no one is a mary sue here.
    21. i cant draw and the person i asked to help is busy.
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    An openic cinematic has always been from the PoV of the villain(s), so I can't imagine characters like Yrel and Varian being as involved in it as you propose.
    Cringeworthy dialogue aside, Wrathion as a villain is and always has been an interesting concept, so a PoV from him or Kil'jaeden would be suitable.
    Why is Yrel so heavily involved? She has accomplished a great many things on Draenor, but not enough to lead the Army of Light, although I favor her over Anduin any day of the week. The Army of Light is a cliché concept to begin with, so I'd scrap that all together. I like to imagine Velen was on shrooms when he saw that vision.
    Zone names need to be pronounceable aswell, or atleast have something like 'mountains' or 'forest' if you're using difficult names.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Beste Kerel View Post
    Zone names need to be pronounceable aswell, or atleast have something like 'mountains' or 'forest' if you're using difficult names.
    I honestly can't take anyone seriously if they can't point out Manaforge Ara, B'naar, Coruu, Duro, and Ultris on an unlabeled map.

    Quote Originally Posted by Darkvoltinx View Post
    15. blizzard said they were bringing him back. so this is all assuming they did.
    Blizzard didn't say they were bringing him back.

    They said they'd 'likely' bring him back at Blizzcon four years ago. That's pretty much synonymous with 'lol', 'jk', and 'Farahlon'.
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    idea sucks

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    Quote Originally Posted by Beste Kerel View Post
    An openic cinematic has always been from the PoV of the villain(s), so I can't imagine characters like Yrel and Varian being as involved in it as you propose.
    Cringeworthy dialogue aside, Wrathion as a villain is and always has been an interesting concept, so a PoV from him or Kil'jaeden would be suitable.
    Why is Yrel so heavily involved? She has accomplished a great many things on Draenor, but not enough to lead the Army of Light, although I favor her over Anduin any day of the week. The Army of Light is a cliché concept to begin with, so I'd scrap that all together. I like to imagine Velen was on shrooms when he saw that vision.
    Zone names need to be pronounceable aswell, or atleast have something like 'mountains' or 'forest' if you're using difficult names.
    classic, most of the BC, and MoP cinematic was not the point of view of the villain.
    it should be a Draenei leading the army of light and i already have a plan for Velen so i didnt make him leader.
    most of the zones names are said how they are spelled but since you brought it up. i will put in how to pronounce them

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    Quote Originally Posted by chazus View Post
    Blizzard didn't say they were bringing him back.

    They said they'd 'likely' bring him back at Blizzcon four years ago. That's pretty much synonymous with 'lol', 'jk', and 'Farahlon'.
    when asked if WoE was illidan's return, metzen said no. which implies at the time they were going to bring him back. also they would need to find the right expansion to bring him back anyway.
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    2. Yrel has no required buildup, or reason to be the leader of the Army of the Light.
    At least Yrel is a draenei.

    Fuck Anduin.

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    Sounds like a cringeworthy fanfic.
    You're getting exactly what you deserve.

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    please be constructive. if you cant dont bother replying
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    Quote Originally Posted by Darkvoltinx View Post
    1. Vol'jin is a loa champion and you say he is shit. also i didnt even give this Loa a name(yet)
    2 and 4. i will write a small shorty explaining Yrel's rise to leader. The army of light have been planning this invasion for years.
    3. since no one really want Anduin to lead it i pick someone else.
    5. 1 orc paladin that came at the price of losing a a naaru.
    6. 3 out of 9 have people dying.
    7. its an assault on a legion planet. people are going to die even major characters
    8. how is sacrificing yourself to save your sister a shit way to go?
    9. no one actually falls into the lava.
    10. depends on the rewards
    11. hunters in game can do that now, your point is what now?
    12. last minute add. already pointed it out so its rushed.
    13. Draenei are aliens i tried for names that would sound somewhat Draenei
    14. its alliance but holding a neutral trial for Wrathion(which interrupted a party.
    15. blizzard said they were bringing him back. so this is all assuming they did.
    16. see 15
    17. see 15
    18. see 15
    19. your talking about sylvanas's death right? it happens get over it.
    20. no one is a mary sue here.
    21. i cant draw and the person i asked to help is busy.
    1. Vol'jin, whether he deserves it or not (He doesn't), is at least a racial leader. Zan'jin, is just one of your characters that was shoved into the universe from nowhere
    2. Planning the invasion for years, seems to conflict with a spur of the moment leadership decision. Not to mention that, while Yrel has done things, she's certainly not worthy of commanding the army of the light.
    3. There are many who don't want Vol'jin as warchief of the Horde, either. Yet look where we are. Hell, you haven't even explained why Anduin isn't leading it.
    4. Addressed in 2
    5. An Orc Paladin nonetheless. It's a ridiculous concept that you should scrap.
    6. You listed 4, and merely mentioned the other 5.
    7. People are going to die. That doesn't mean they should die in the shittiest way possible.
    8. Because at the end of Warcrimes Sylvanas basically thought to herself that "she would never love again." Given that, in conjunction with her only interest being in keeping herself alive, why in the Hell would she sacrifice herself?
    9. Oh, so it's just a "süber kewl"-uninspired arena. That's better, but not by much.
    10. The rewards have no bearing on whether or not the gameplay would be terrible. The gameplay is terrible.
    11. My Warrior can dual-wield Shadowmourne and Sulfuras, whilst riding on Al'ar. A Lore character doing the same would be Mary-Sue as fuck. Your idea is Mary-Sue as fuck.
    12. You probably shouldn't be rushing and adding things last minute if you want people to take your ideas seriously at all.
    13. I can't really say any of the names sound Draenic at all.
    14. And why are they holding a trial for Wrathion? Why would this neutral trial take place in Dalaran, of all places.
    15. That was also 4 years ago. We haven't seen sight of him since.
    16. Why is he back?
    17. see 17.
    18. Given Illidan's history with the Legion, surely there would be someone who would oppose his presence. Lore characters are not the WoW community.
    19. Yes, I am. "Death happens" doesn't excuse the fact that it's done in a horrible way, which conflicts with not only Sylvanas' character, but Blizzard's future ideas for her as well.
    20. Yes, Zan'jin is Mary Sue as fuck.
    21. Unrelated images drawn for other purposes aren't out of the question. Hell, you could at least give very rough maps for those BG ideas of yours.

    Your idea is bad,
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    get over it.

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    No mention of Mac'Aree and Kaarinos, which are two mentioned locations of Argus? I am disappoint.
    But remember: Everything can work, if there's a good explanation. EVERYTHING. Yes, even the Orc Paladin. But only with a good explanation. An regular explanation will not do it - it must be a GOOD explanation.

    4/10, not as bad as Alternate Universe's Cho'gall's wrong model.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BotFen View Post
    No mention of Mac'Aree and Kaarinos, which are two mentioned locations of Argus? I am disappoint.
    But remember: Everything can work, if there's a good explanation. EVERYTHING. Yes, even the Orc Paladin. But only with a good explanation. An regular explanation will not do it - it must be a GOOD explanation.

    4/10, not as bad as Alternate Universe's Cho'gall's wrong model.
    I can always add those later
    Anemo: traveler, Sucrose
    Pyro: Yanfei, Amber, diluc, xiangling, thoma, Xinyan, Bennett
    Geo: Noelle, Ningguang, Yun Jin, Gorou
    Hydro: Barbara, Zingqiu, Ayato
    Cyro: Shenhe, Kaeya, Chongyun, Diona, Ayaka, Rosaria
    Electro: Fischl, Lisa, Miko, Kujou, Raiden, Razor

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    Quote Originally Posted by Darkvoltinx View Post
    I can always add those later
    That's the kind of half-assed justification that might one day land you a job at Blizzard.

    You'll fit right in.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wildberry View Post
    That's the kind of half-assed justification that might one day land you a job at Blizzard.

    You'll fit right in.
    I forgot about them big deal.
    Even with your cynical attitude and all the rest the haters. I dont care what you all think i will continue this idea and improve on them later
    Anemo: traveler, Sucrose
    Pyro: Yanfei, Amber, diluc, xiangling, thoma, Xinyan, Bennett
    Geo: Noelle, Ningguang, Yun Jin, Gorou
    Hydro: Barbara, Zingqiu, Ayato
    Cyro: Shenhe, Kaeya, Chongyun, Diona, Ayaka, Rosaria
    Electro: Fischl, Lisa, Miko, Kujou, Raiden, Razor

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    Quote Originally Posted by Darkvoltinx View Post
    I forgot about them big deal.
    Even with your cynical attitude and all the rest the haters. I dont care what you all think i will continue this idea and improve on them later
    Blizzard forgot about Farahlon, big deal.
    Northrend without Icecrown? Big deal.
    Outland without Shadowmoon Valley? Big deal.

    It would probably be a good idea, to somewhat familiarize yourself with the place you plan on making an expansion about.

    But yeah, keep on improving it, you've got a long way to go.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wildberry View Post
    Blizzard forgot about Farahlon, big deal.
    Northrend without Icecrown? Big deal.
    Outland without Shadowmoon Valley? Big deal.

    It would probably be a good idea, to somewhat familiarize yourself with the place you plan on making an expansion about.

    But yeah, keep on improving it, you've got a long way to go.
    They didn't forget about it. You sent followers to it.
    Not the same
    Not the same

    Go bother someone else. Stalker
    Anemo: traveler, Sucrose
    Pyro: Yanfei, Amber, diluc, xiangling, thoma, Xinyan, Bennett
    Geo: Noelle, Ningguang, Yun Jin, Gorou
    Hydro: Barbara, Zingqiu, Ayato
    Cyro: Shenhe, Kaeya, Chongyun, Diona, Ayaka, Rosaria
    Electro: Fischl, Lisa, Miko, Kujou, Raiden, Razor

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    That's funny, Assault on Argus is the exact name I've been saying the next expansion should be since like Cataclysm. Anyways... As much as I love tinkers, if you're going to do a heavily themed legion expansion you need a demon hunter class.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ulgrim View Post
    That's funny, Assault on Argus is the exact name I've been saying the next expansion should be since like Cataclysm. Anyways... As much as I love tinkers, if you're going to do a heavily themed legion expansion you need a demon hunter class.
    This was created using the assumption that illidan returned years earlier and already taught people to be demon hunters
    Anemo: traveler, Sucrose
    Pyro: Yanfei, Amber, diluc, xiangling, thoma, Xinyan, Bennett
    Geo: Noelle, Ningguang, Yun Jin, Gorou
    Hydro: Barbara, Zingqiu, Ayato
    Cyro: Shenhe, Kaeya, Chongyun, Diona, Ayaka, Rosaria
    Electro: Fischl, Lisa, Miko, Kujou, Raiden, Razor

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    Quote Originally Posted by Darkvoltinx View Post
    They didn't forget about it. You sent followers to it.
    People will legitimately defend this.

    Not the same
    Not the same
    It's an expansion around a noteworthy place, that's missing one of the key locations that has been mentioned. It's pretty much the same.

    Go bother someone else. Stalker
    Funny, considering how you always seem to stumble across discussions I'm in, and make senseless comments. Should I just quote that to you next time? Oh well, I guess it's not just criticism you don't want, it's constructive criticism as well.

    You know, you've designed a piss-poor expansion, you've given half-assed justifications for what is really your laziness, you've failed to familiarize yourself with what your making, and you've arbitrarily dismissed any sort of constructive criticism.

    At this point, you seriously should apply to Blizzard, you're like Celestalon, Watcher, Holinka and Afrasiabi rolled into one package.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Darkvoltinx View Post
    This was created using the assumption that illidan returned years earlier and already taught people to be demon hunters
    The opening cinematic implies that Wrathion is on Trial for his role in Garrosh's release and the events that followed. When did Illydanz come back?

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