So here's my Ursoc kill, snipped to be the same length as yours.
https://www.warcraftlogs.com/reports...5&end=10626773
While running ghostly strike I manage to get off 6 more run throughs and 9 more saber slashes. I believe you're probably using pistol shot too much in situations where it's not advisable to do so (energy capping situations) or wasting CP. Outlaw logs are really hard to break down you can tell from raw ability usage there's room for improvement. Also make sure you're prioritizing run through relics. We had roughly the same crit rate on RT but I was hitting 260k harder (a lot of this is gear, yes, but I was only 852 at the time of this I think).