I generally like everything I saw, but I think the talents do a little to much for the amount of talent points required. I'm actually working on my own Paladin trees, which is why I haven't been posting as much. I will say mine is a lot more conservative lol.
I also feel Repentance should not be basline; the general theme is that only dps should be able to properly CC. Although I have been an advocate for baseline Holy Shock since 1.9.