Vindicator Saakaarrag

[Sietchtabr]

Name: Vindicator Saakaarrag.
Age: 25K
Race: Draenei
Gender: Male
Class: Paladin
Alignment: somewhere between lawful good and lawful neutral.

Bio: Once a scholar on the eredar home world of argus, Saakaarrag lived a peaceful life with his wife Neii. When Velen revealed his Vision to the eredar, Saakaarrag was one of the first to volunteer to follow Velen. But his wife was very dismissive of this idea. The last time Saakaarrag saw Neii he got in a very angry verbal fight wit Neii. To this day Saakaarrag had no idea what happened to Neii, or what she might of become.

With his heart broken he threw himself whole-heatedly into his studies of the Light. During the draenei's exodus aboard Oshu'gun he met a like minded female draenei priest by the name of Feera. Though his heart still ached from the lose of his first wife, Saakaarrag soon found solace in the love of this new priest. Whilst together they felt as though nothing was impossible. Saakaarrag soon proved his mettle and was promoted into the elite ranks of the Hand of Argus.

When Oshu'gun crashed into Draenor Saakaarrag and his wife soon settled into a town that would become their new capital, Shattrah. During this time of peace Saakarrag and Feera conceived a daughter whom they named Ellomin. Saakaarrag served the Hand with pride believing that the Draenei had finally found peace. He served as a guard on some of the several trade caravans with the orcs. During these trips he garnered a lot of respect for the orcish people and their shamanistic culture.

One bright day Saakaarrag was tasked with the honor of serving as one of the bodyguard for Velen. Saakaarrag decided to bring Ellomin with him in order for her to meet the Prophet. Sadly this was the day that the orcs raised Shattrah. Saakaarrag was ordered to immediately escort Velen to safety in Zangarmarsh. With his daughter in tow he made a hasty escape with the rest of the bodyguard.

Hoping that Feera had somehow survived the attack, Saakaarrag volunteered for a mission to search for any survivors in Shattrah. The group was somehow successful in infiltrating the city, but what they found made the strongest of them swoon. As they made their way through the carnage Saakaarrag found the body of his dear wife Feera. The next thing he remembered was being in a small tent alongside his daughter clutching a pendat that his wife once wore. When he asked the other draenei who accompanied him he found out that he had flown into a rage where it took three other draenei to hold him down while they escaped from the city. From that day forward Saakaarrag held a deep hate for what the Orcs had done to his people.

During the capture and flight of the Exodar Saakaarrag soon found another race that disgusted him as much as the orcs did, the Blood Elves. Though he did not hate them with the same passion as tthe orcs he felt that the capture of a Naaru was quite disgusting.

Once on Azeroth Saakaarrag soon found out that his daughter had quite the aptitude for shamanistic magic. Fearing that he would lose the last thing that he love, he was hesitant to allow his daughter to further her studies. Eventually he gave in to his daughter's demand, under the condition that she never went anywhere without his protection. With this agreement Ellomin studied under Farseer Nobundo in the art of the shaman.

In a recent turn of events Saakaarrag was able to join the 7th Legion in Northrend. While apart of this army he participated in the Siege of Naxxramas. Where he bravely fought alongside other soldiers of the Alliance to push back the Scourge advance and defeat Kel'thuzad. After the events at the wraith gate Saakaarrag and the 7th were deployed to the Isle of Conquest where they fight a bloody battle over the island's resources.

((This is my first attempt at RP, so any tips would be helpful))

[Deleted]

Effin sweet. Great to see a well-written and original bio

[Sietchtabr]

thanks for the compliment, this is my first time making a character for forum roleplay. Though I do have extensive experience with D&D. :P

Though I do wonder if my inclusion of a minor character(Ellomin) is something that would be ok?

[Sietchtabr]

Ellomin's Bio((she is a minor character, but I feel that she is very important to the developement of my character))

Raceraenei
Age: 30((I couldn't find any info at what rate the draenei age, so I am saying she is the equivalent of about a 12 year old in human years))
Class: Shaman
Gender:female

Bio: Born to Saakaarrag and Feera this young draenei has lived in relative peace for most of her life. On the day the the orcs attacked Shattrah she was with her father when he was assinged guard duty for velen. So she was evacuated quickly from the massacre and has no memory of it. Though her mother was killed in the fighting, she believes that her mother died of a disease.

While in hiding in Zangarmarsh, she showed quite an aptitude for shamanistic magic. She studied under FarSeer Nobundo for several years. When the exodar crashed on Azeroth, she was able to stay near her father. She continued her training here under the tutelage of Nobundo. During this time Saakaarrag did everything possible to protect her from the outside world. But when called upon Saakaarrag had to join the Seventh Legion in Northrend. Now that the fighting has died down in the North Saakaarrag was able to return home.

Upon returning home he found his daughter had expanded her control over the elements tremedously. But she wanted to see the world outside of the Exodar. After several weeks of pleading with her father, she finally got him to agree to show her around the world. Overjoyed at the thought of being her father's traveling companion, she rarely ever leaves his side.

[The Madgod]

both bios are very well made

the madgod approves! :P

[Garots]

both bios are very well made

the madgod approves! :P

Get your butt over to the war RP thread now. =P

[The Madgod]

Get your butt over to the war RP thread now. =P

but... but.... i has no SRP character yet! only a cannibalistic moon-sick drunkard paladin!

[Alopex Major]

(( Still debating if I want to bring any of my characters onto the forums, but this is tempting me haha. I've got a pretty long story I wrote about my main, the Anchorite Vajarra and her sister, a Vindicator. ))

[Sietchtabr]

Don't be afraid, we can always use more RP characters, especially ones that aren't undead or blood elves, or even worse, *shudder* Blood elf forsaken.

[Deleted]

Don't be afraid, we can always use more RP characters, especially ones that aren't undead or blood elves, or even worse, *shudder* Blood elf forsaken.

I heard that. xP

[The Madgod]

I'm technically a HIGH elf forsaken (and an old god ), so neaugh :P