Bio: Callieth Windwhisper

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First time RPer, need some help with history & age.

Name: Callieth Windwhisper

Age: 141

Race: Night elf

Gender: Female

Class: Ex Sentinel-Huntress, now a wandering hunter.

Personality: Neutral good, does whatever feels morally right to her. Will disobay orders if they contradict her beliefs. Has a hard time trusting people.

Likes: Likes her two pets more the anything, honest and helpfull people & animals/wildlife.
Dislikes: Dislikes orcs & goblins more then anything, her home was scavaged and burnt down by pillaging orcs in Ashenvale. Has a hard time trusting military authority.

Appearance: Callieth's hair is dark purple and is always kept in a long ponytail. Her skin is light blueish with a grey tone. Callieth is naturally quite tall, and her eyes shine with a very distinct glow. She never wear any markins except for in times of war. In these times she cover her face with a half-moon wich covers nearlly her entire left cheek. She has a scar on her right shoulder,a mark of war.

Strengths: Her never-ending love for animals & the nature. Willing to give her life for the greater good. Very agile and fast.
Weaknesses: Her distrust to other races and even her own race at times. Her blind hatered to orcs, if she gets the chance to kill one, she wont care about the consequenses or what the motive of its presence is.

History: Born 70 years before the war of the burning legion, she had the normal elven childhood, learning about the precious animals and wildlife by her father Dersadol Whisperwind, a commoner who worked as a herbalist. Her mother however, died from childbirth so she never had her in her life. Callieth had two older siblings. A sister and brother, Carea & Mord.

At the age of 71, her father, her sister and her brother all enrolled to fight in the war of the burning legion. Leaving her in the care of her brothers wife, Kylanna Windwhisper. Years passed and Callieth had not heard a single word about her family.
Growing tired of waiting, she confronted her sister in-law, who then confessed. Her entire family had been killed 10 years ago. Callieth who felt she had nothing to live for anymore, and utterly betrayed by Kylanna, left the forest of Ashenvale and set foot to Darnassus where she found inner-peace by joining the novice ranks of the Sentinels.

Her instructor, a huntress named Lian, saw her potential and taught her to commune with the animals and especially the beloved owls who huntress's hold so dear. Lian even introduced her to her very own owl, Bubo. These two grew close to eachother, never leaving one-anothers side. Bubo was her eyes, her very soul. Her instructor saw her burning desire for her animal, and introduced her to the next pet who would make her a true huntress. The darkcoloured nightsabre, Agassou. The three grew close to one another.
By now, 30 years later, she was a fully pledged huntress, mature and old enough to enroll to be a soldier in the name of Shandris Feathermoon & Darnassus.

However, things did not turn out as planned, Callieth was told some terrible news, the orcs had taken over parts of Ashenvale.
Her house, the last remnant of her family, had been lost. Kaylanna had escaped and was now in Darnassus, selling the very last herbs her father had gathered before leaving her. In her anger Callieth rode to Kaylanna, charging her with her newly-earned moon glaives, the blow was not deadly, but the simple fact that a huntress, a protector of elune & the light, did something like that to a commoner, was something beyond-belief. So she was denounced from her rank of huntress, Lian and the officers agreed to let her keep the animals, but she was stripped from her armour, her weapons and her last form of inner-peace. So she set her eyes onto Ashenvale, to hunt down the orcs who burnt down her home, to find the people who killed her family, and to take back what was rightfully hers.

By now, she's a wanderer, she has her fellow pets by her side and she has learned how to commune with the plants and normal plant creatures, like a true Sentinel can. 10 years has passed since her dennouncement, still a lost soul seeking for retribution.

[Krenden]

Generally elves reach adulthood anywhere from around 100-200...

[The Madgod]

night elves mature differently than humans. For example, they reach adulthood at 110 years of age. You may want to edit your character's history for this to work out. I don't see any other major problems, but I'm fairly tired right now :P

Timeline for reference

[Deleted]

That should do it, anything else you think might need some redoing?

[The Madgod]

I THINK everything looks good... did you submit an app?