Rate my Commentarys (Zul'Gurub guide throughs and more!)

[Azamous]

Hey guys, Azamous here, I'm new to the mmo-champion community and I was just wondering if you guys could help me out a little.

I've been on the PTR and I decided to make a few videos on Zul'Gurub and Zul'Aman, but I'm not to sure on my commentary, so this is where you guys come in, I want you guys to give me feedback on my commentary and tell me what I'm doing wrong, or if I'm doing anything wrong, I'm from Britain so it can't be that hard to understand, right?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8DejpAqe3Z8 - here's the video where I explain how to kill High Priest Venoxis.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2p5U7oHoBwY - here's the video where I explain the use of cauldrons in Zul'Gurub
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q48AQvqBnWM - here's the video where I explain how to kill Mor'Lek

I will be updating this thread with every boss in the instance and will be uploading lots of class tutorials for arenas, and more PvE content, please give me feedback, I will respond to every comment!

[Burlacher]

1) dont use language that can be deemed inappropriate ie. retarded. dont say that ever in a commentary video,
2) get rid of all thsoe boxes
otherwsie thats all i got