I apologize for reposting this, and I hope a moderator can delete my old post on this topic. I felt the need to repost this since I have made many revisions to the story, and hope at this time of day the post can get a bit more exposure.
Below is a link to my fan fiction novel Star Wars: The Seed of Vader. I hope the MMO champ community can give it a read and post any comments they have about it. Thanks all.