1. #1

    i cant sleep so..

    i wrote a peom, feel free to pick at it but sorry for bad grammar.

    once an early morning fog,
    now miles from the ground and i can see everything all around,
    though my life is not for very long,
    i could be cumulus, stratus or even a tad
    cirrus,
    i hope the breeze that carries me mixes ever slightly with friends and family and while we dance far above i hope these days could last for many years with or without any tears. sencerly yours -nimbus
    To say of what is that it is not, or of what is not that it is, is false, while to say of what is that it is, and of what is not that it is not, is true.

  2. #2
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    Seemed like it was more of a love note to me :P

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    Quote Originally Posted by xK1DREAPERx View Post
    Seemed like it was more of a love note to me :P
    ^ this. Last night i also wrote a couple of things.

    A soul that withers,
    Where pain is a must.
    With a voice that whispers:
    DONT EVER TRUST.

    A serious thought
    Of death by Mutilation;
    My heart was caught...
    Hard to resist temptation.
    I look up to the sky
    Weaving a goodbye

    With my knee bent
    A small prayer
    With my eyes spent
    A small tear
    With a knife in the hand
    A pool of blood in the sand

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    Why so 'cirrus'?

    Sorry, I really couldn't help it.
    I have no knowledge when it comes to poems, never understood the point, but it contained words that I didn't know, so I looked them up and learned something, so thanks, I guess

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    I wrote a poem yesterday, it's about hugging. I actually enjoy making small, cheerful poems that aren't about these great things (love, death, life).

    Du må ha ein klem!
    Ein klem er bra,
    ein klem gjer deg glad!
    Kva hadde verda
    vore utan ein klem?
    Klem nokon i dag!
    Kva hadde verda vore
    utan ein klem no og då?
    Klem, klem, klem!

    And in English (Just a quick translation)
    You need a hug!
    A hug is good,
    a hug makes you happy!
    What would the world
    have been like without a hug?
    Hug someone today!
    What would the world
    have been like without a hug every now and then?
    Hug, hug, hug!

    I feel so talented
    Quote Originally Posted by Vaerys
    Gaze upon the field in which I grow my fucks, and see that it is barren.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Faenskap View Post
    I wrote a poem yesterday, it's about hugging. I actually enjoy making small, cheerful poems that aren't about these great things (love, death, life).

    Du må ha ein klem!
    Ein klem er bra,
    ein klem gjer deg glad!
    Kva hadde verda
    vore utan ein klem?
    Klem nokon i dag!
    Kva hadde verda vore
    utan ein klem no og då?
    Klem, klem, klem!

    And in English (Just a quick translation)
    You need a hug!
    A hug is good,
    a hug makes you happy!
    What would the world
    have been like without a hug?
    Hug someone today!
    What would the world
    have been like without a hug every now and then?
    Hug, hug, hug!

    I feel so talented
    Nynorsk bro? Dei er få :P

    OT : Nice one. (Atleast i hope so)
    Emotional Skyscraper ~ Cosmic Mind

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    I couldn't sleep
    So I wrote a poem so deep
    It'll make you weep
    This is the dope
    It will inspire hope
    It will help you cope
    I posted it on MMO-Champ
    When I should've turned off the lamp

    Please don't hate
    Some call it fate
    I had to kick it out the gate
    Do realize it had to be done
    Hey, what are you doing son?
    Please put away that gun
    Take it easy, chill out Gwarr
    Istherion apologizes, he wants no war



    POEM BATTLE, the white people version of rap battle.

    PS: I haven't slept in long either lolz, so this is probably some incoherent rambling, mkay
    Last edited by Istherion; 2011-07-13 at 06:49 PM.

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    great ones guys, im glad to see good responses.

    istherion +5 internetz for you my friend!
    To say of what is that it is not, or of what is not that it is, is false, while to say of what is that it is, and of what is not that it is not, is true.

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    Nynorsk, yes (it's superior to bokmål, and we all know it)

    Yay, poem battle! I can't think of anything clever right now though.

    From my head I remove my hat
    and out comes a cat
    It is mostly black but also a little white
    It turns toward me and says
    "I can't cope with this shite"
    And there it runs, the cat from the hat.
    Quote Originally Posted by Vaerys
    Gaze upon the field in which I grow my fucks, and see that it is barren.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Istherion View Post
    I couldn't sleep
    So I wrote a poem so deep
    It'll make you weep
    This is the dope
    It will inspire hope
    It will help you cope
    I posted it on MMO-Champ
    When I should've turned off the lamp

    Please don't hate
    Some call it fate
    I had to kick it out the gate
    Do realize it had to be done
    Hey, what are you doing son?
    Please put away that gun
    Take it easy, chill out Gwarr
    Istherion apologizes, he wants no war



    POEM BATTLE, the white people version of rap battle.

    PS: I haven't slept in long either lolz, so this is probably some incoherent rambling, mkay
    Well, this one is cool~ I like it!

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    Well, now I'm the one who can't sleep I'll try and make a poem. It would seem like we have quite a few poets here

    I think about WoW
    Four years of passion
    gone, like spring's fashion
    Could that sensation
    yet again be lit?

    In terms of gaming I felt fit
    but only in PvE; never in PvP
    Why? Frost mages they freeze faces,
    particularly mine
    Couldn't even beat one
    if I boxed with nine
    From rogues I was stun
    no matter how hard I tried
    never could I them shun
    Inside my head I cried,
    and upon my tears they fed

    Vanilla, I never knew you,
    I started in TBC
    All except Kara, Gruul and Maggy
    remained unknown to me

    Thoughts of past glories are hard to come by,
    all I can think of is LFD's douchebaggery
    Right now I'm on a break;
    there's only so much I can take
    Inside me, there is a lake
    of words I'd like to call
    those I met who weren't nice

    Anonymity is great, for I suspect
    that assholes are in real life more like mice
    However
    Captain Hindsight is not much help
    I must look forward, and not thinking about
    rude people makes me feel great
    Right now I'm on a break
    and I shan't come back
    even if Blizzard offered me a cake
    Quote Originally Posted by Vaerys
    Gaze upon the field in which I grow my fucks, and see that it is barren.

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    I liked the poem about hugs.

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    Yay, thank you
    Quote Originally Posted by Vaerys
    Gaze upon the field in which I grow my fucks, and see that it is barren.

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