Originally Posted by
vizzle
*The intro is too long
*The background music, what the hell. Take it off or change it, do something to it.
*Your voice. Again, I hope you don't take this personally, but your voice is blah. It's not the kind of voice that really demands the attention of the audience, but something more that eventually fades out to the background while I just watch the videos. You need more BOOM and more POWER in your voice.
*Stop eating your words. It makes you a bad speaker; it makes you seem lazy. Pronounce your words properly, don't eat them.