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    [Bio] Sianne Dawnreaver

    Name: Sianne Dawnreaver

    Age: 109

    Race: Blood elf

    Gender: Female

    Class: Warrior, Ranger

    Languages: Thalassian, Common, Orchish

    Personality: Sianne is a strong, Social and confident.She always like to meet new people. Sianne likes the nature and is most of the time outside. She got alot of trust from her squad and wont stop till a mission is completed.

    Likes Nature, Going outside, Drinking with friends. Training with her squad.

    Dislikes: Scourge, arrogant people, Alliance,

    Appearance: http://i.imgur.com/FDZLV.jpg

    Strengths her self-confidence making her strong and nothing can stop her before she completed her task, She is skilled with sword and shield, Even she got a eye injury it maked her easier to shoot with guns and bows.

    Weaknesses: Only can see with one eye while the other is covered by a eye-lap, she could see some incoming atacks from her side to late. Sometimes her anger overwhelm her and charge into her enemy's withouth thinking what could happen after.

    Family:

    Kolarian Dawnreaver (Father) - Deceased
    Valliane Dawnreaver (Mother) - Deceased
    Valine Dawnreaver (sister) - Alive

    History:

    Birth

    Sianne was born in the beautiful Quel'Thalas, she was the daughter of a baker who was well known in Silvermoon City. Sianne had also a five year younger sister called Valine. They were good friends of each other. Sianne always tried to get Valine outside to play with her friends but she rejected and hided where her sister and family couldn’t find her. Most of the time Sianne and some friends spended looking at the training of the silvermoon rangers. Her dream was to become a ranger someday with her friends to fight any enemy's that would be a threat for Quel'Thalas.

    Murder

    Ten years had passed and on a night Sianne awaked from a hard noise. Getting out of her bed she walked slowly to the door, taking a big breath she opens the door slowly and looks behind it. Seeing someone entering the room of her parents, seconds later she hear the screams of her father and mother coming out of their room. Taking some steps back she looked again. Seeing a blood elf coming out of the room with two bloody draggers in his hand, with an evil laugh he made his way to Valine’s room. Opening the door she slowly walked to the room of her parents. Her face became white. Trying to scream and cry she saw the bodies of her father and mother on the floor lying in a pool of blood. Falling on her knees she stared to her father and mother, still can’t believe they were dead, she looked behind her. Hearing footsteps coming closer Sianne started to panic. What she must do she though. She had to do something before the person would kill her and what about her sister is she dead to? Without thinking she opened the window and jumped out, running on the streets to find help, with the sun coming up she approached the guards. Crying and be confused she asked the guards for help. Arriving at her home the guards searched through the house for the murderer but he already fled. Entering the house Sianne looked around her, entering the room of her sister she looked shocked. The whole room was a mesh but there was no body or any sign of Valine. Searching through the whole house, but Sianne could’t any sign of her sister. What could happen with her? She escaped or the murder kidnapped her , and what if the murderer killed her after. Taking a seat on a chair she started to cry, in a couple of hours she lost her family.

    A foster home

    After the murder on her family one of Sianne’s friends parents taked her as a foster child, Still being depressed by the dead of her father, mother and unknowing faith of her sister Valine, she smiled and thanked her foster parents to take care of her. The friend of Sianne that asked her parents to take her as a foster child was named Larissa Hawkstrider, her dream was the same as of Sianne to be a ranger of Silvermoon city. The father of Larissa was a blacksmith and her mother worked in a tavern as a barmaid. The years after Sianne felled more comfortable in the Hawkstrider family and helped her foster mother in the tavern with Larissa to gif her thanks for all the things they done for her.

    Training as a Ranger

    Scourge Invasion

    War against the Lich King

    The Dawnreaver Sisters



    Work in progress, the sister of my rp char Valine Dawnreaver will introduce her in the War of the North Rp thread.
    Last edited by mmoc7b201a41d6; 2011-12-06 at 11:04 AM. Reason: Added history parts

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    Dude, improve your English grammar and spelling. Ofzo xD

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    I know my english grammar is bad, but the true thing is better a good story with grammar mistakes then a bad story that is writed with no grammar mistakes in it.
    Last edited by mmoc7b201a41d6; 2011-12-02 at 01:55 PM.

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    Once you're finished with the story, I'm always willing to proofread and correct things. If that would be okay with you, of course :3

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    yeah sure help with grammar is always welcome :P

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    Added the first parts of her history, also added the names of the parts

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