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Thread: First Rap, Thoughts?
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2012-02-03, 09:56 PM #1Field Marshal
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First Rap, Thoughts?
Last edited by Fantoz; 2012-02-03 at 10:02 PM.
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2012-02-03, 09:59 PM #2Mechagnome
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The lyrics are terribly disturbing & your vocal expression whilst "rapping" (if you can call it that) is boring.
Sounds like you're reading it from a piece of paper than rapping it from the heart or w/ some passion.
Terrible.Last edited by Aryl; 2012-02-03 at 10:01 PM.
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2012-02-03, 10:00 PM #3Deletedi have to agree with him...no passion whatsoever, and the lyrics....come on man...im looking at your photo on the video and i cant believe squat of what you're saying.
Originally Posted by Aryl
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2012-02-03, 10:01 PM #4Deleted
Maybe you should improve your "flow" a bit more, think it will be better then!
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2012-02-03, 10:02 PM #5Pandaren Monk
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Yeah, its really boring and flat, no offense but the corny insults just suck without contempt in your voice
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2012-02-03, 10:05 PM #6Mechagnome
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This & Originally Posted by Flickyz
"imma stand by and make you wave goodbye
to your own life fuck your wife then put it on the TV so everyone can see me"
Your YouTube channel says you're 15. So you want to have underaged sex w/ someone's wife (probably old enough to be your mother) which is probably paedophilic and you want to air this (which would be child pornography) on TV?
I think you need to grow up & rap from your heart, not write then dictate nonsense with your childlike face on a YouTube video. You aint fucking, killing or experiencing any of the things you are "rapping". So I don't see the point in what you've written it's not even remotely intriguing.
It's actually painful to listen to. The way you're gasping for air trying to squeeze an extra word into every sentence. The way your voice has no flow. It's just awful.Last edited by Aryl; 2012-02-03 at 10:09 PM.
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2012-02-03, 10:08 PM #7Mechagnome
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aw. i was looking forwards to a good lol. why the snip OP?
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2012-02-03, 10:29 PM #8Titan
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This would go in the Music subforum.
