[Music] Do you like this tune?

[Deleted]

Hello!

Thanks for already reading these first words :3 cause well i know, time is money friend!

Anywho... im not here to promote my channel or something, but we have created an outro song for our video's mostly to put behind the ending part.
I would appriciate YOUR oppinion on it,

- What do you like about it?
- What DONT you like about it

[Eorayn]

It doesn’t really sound like an outdo tune, but it is definitely not bad

[Lumberjack]

There are too many things going on and too many changes. You need to remove some stuff and tighten it up and make it sound more fluid.

[Youvegotfail]

There is too many things going on and too many changes. You need to remove some stuff and tighten it up and make it sound more fluid.

EXACTLY THIS. (except replace "is" with "are")

It's not bad, there's some interesting stuff going on, but not all the elements work together. Also it doesn't really sound like an "outro" to me either.