My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Part 8: Mmmcake

[Temp name]

You don't like old Metallica, so you don't get to comment on other peoples taste in music

Your opinion is invalid.

[Dontrike]

It's a bit difficult to really have a proper opinion since it's just fragments. The style seems pretty good to me, but again, hard to tell from so little.

also.. Black and White are supposed to be Celestia and Luna I guess? In that case Dark and Light would be better I think, as Luna isn't black but dark blue.

Well those fragments are long stretches of time.

And yes, those would be Celestia and Luna. I guess dark blue would work. I didn't think it would at first, but now that I see it it does look a tad odd.

[isi]

It's that isi person! The one who hates dubstep and likes In Flames! *snicker*

yep, that's right... honestly, how can one not hate dubstep?

[Dontrike]

I want to read it.. just not right now.

That is alright too. I was not assuming that you didn't want to.

[Freyera]

[video=youtube;sDdL4z5qfr4]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sDdL4z5qfr4[/viddeo]
There.

I see >>

[Deleted]

Your opinion is invalid.

No, my opinion is fact.

Well those fragments are long stretches of time.

And yes, those would be Celestia and Luna. I guess dark blue would work. I didn't think it would at first, but now that I see it it does look a tad odd.

It's your story, so entirely up to you, just something I noticed

[Temp name]

yep, that's right... honestly, how can one not hate dubstep?

Easily, by having ears.

[Freyera]

No, my opinion is fact.

It's your story, so entirely up to you, just something I noticed

* Throws loofahs at

[Drafo]

Yozzers Dragon. How are you today?

oh i am tired because i have worked for 15hours yesterday. good thing there is pony to keep me awake

[Temp name]

No, my opinion is fact.

Hehe. Silly Store thinking his opinion matters.

[Deleted]

* Throws loofahs at

* throws isi at

[Temp name]

oh i am tired because i have worked for 15hours yesterday. good thing there is pony to keep me awake

Pony? Pony where? Where is the pony?

[Deleted]

Hehe. Silly Store thinking his opinion matters.

I think it matters, and since my opinion is fact, then it does matter

[Temp name]

I think it matters, and since my opinion is fact, then it does matter

Well played..

[Freyera]

* throws isi at

Well then. I'm screwed.

[Temp name]

Well then. I'm screwed.

It's just isi.. He's not that heavy.

[Dontrike]

It's your story, so entirely up to you, just something I noticed

Criticism and opinions are always welcome.

oh i am tired because i have worked for 15hours yesterday. good thing there is pony to keep me awake

Sounds awful. You can make it more awful by reading that snippet of story I put on the last page.

[isi]

Easily, by not having ears.

fix'd it for you...

*swats Meh*

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It's just isi.. He's not that heavy.

haha... ahahahhaa.... ha.... ... /sad

[Sofii]

You don't like old Metallica, so you don't get to comment on other peoples taste in music

Awww I think I should be allowed to...

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Well played..

He got me with that the other night.

[Temp name]

fix'd it for you...

*swats Meh*

Why would you do something like that? You know I'm immune to isi swats..