Why do you make up so many details? Because you think it's likelier Blizzard will call you and say "we saw your post on a forum and want to hire you" if you do as much work as possible for them?
I saw the other thread. I'm not trying to be an ass, but trust me dude, the HP if the mobs you pictures is irrelevant. Then I'd rather you expand more on lore-wise implications. If they introduce Castle Gilneas, how will they do it? What does it have to do with the Lich King? Put it into context instead of putting a bunch of numbers in there to look nice imo.
Other than that though, props on the time spent if nothing else lol. I didn't read this second one yet.