That bit had all the punch to the gut of the original quest text Saurfang delivers when the player brings him his son's armor. This story itself isn't too shabby, although in parts it kinda reads like fanfiction written by an author REALLY REALLY REALLY excited to show off what they've come up with and rush through all of the "boring" parts and dive headlong into all the exciting, juicy bits. Kinda makes the pacing henky."We came from Dalaran, by way of Agmar's Hammer," Thrall told him. He paused a moment. "We paid homage at the Wrath Gate." Varok remained silent.
"I am sorry about Dranosh," Thrall said.
"My son died an honorable death, defending his people," Varok replied, a bit too swiftly. "His spirit shall be avenged when we defeat the Lich King."