Originally Posted by
Papasmokes
Just a quick analysis of him is showing a few things wrong right off of the bat.
In a 3:29 fight he hit 14 out of a possible 34 Kill Commands. That's a huge DPS loss. He's 1.5%+ over the Hit cap and .5% over the Exp. cap, but it seems he's reforging everything out of Hit that he can so that's just a gear issue at this point.
He's also casting Cobra shot too much. In 3:29 he cast Cobra Shot 47 times. I looked at one of my logs for IJ heroic and in 4:50 I cast it 55 times (and I'm no 99%er). In that same 4:50 fight I had 372k DPS v. his 285k at equivalent item levels. Even taking out some variables, with almost a minute and a half quicker kill than me he should have destroyed my DPS.
He cast Serpent Sting 5 times during the fight which either means he let it fall of 4 times or is just wasting those GCDs - either way that's no good. He only got 6 out of 13 Glaive Tosses off as well.
He only got 4 out of 6 Dire Beasts off (damn near could have gotten 7) and only used Rapid Fire once. Even without the 2pc set bonus he could have cast it at least twice (with all of the Arcane Shots he put down range it should have come up 4 or 5 times).
Basically his CD usage is off, and he could use some more macros. Send him over to Azor's Hunter F.A.Q. thread to look up the basic macros, openers, and WeakAuras. Those should significantly increase his DPS. Then onto a practice dummy to train himself to hit priority abilities correctly.
If I missed anything, my more experienced colleagues will surely let you know. However, that should be most of the basics.