Hello!
I created a history for my death knight and I would like to ask you to read it and tell me if everything is lore accurate! For which I will be very grateful. If there is something wrong or out of place, please suggest a change.

Dalemir is from a noble family in Stratholme. His father, Marwood Charlton was a well-known playwright and poet; his specialty was comedy, showing vanity and corruption of the highest strata in society and moralizing songs. Marwood, unlike most artists he never courted Stratholme nobility. After the premiere of one of his poems Charlton was accused of insulting one of the high lords. The trial was a short process and he was beheaded, his property was confiscated, manuscripts burned and all family members were sentenced to infamy.

Dalemir, the second son of Marwood, was sixteen years old. When he left the borders of Stratholme he became a mercenary in Durnholde Keep during the reign of Lieutenant General Aedelas Blackmoore. He served there until the siege led by Thrall during which Durnholde was destroyed, and the internment camp system ended. By the end of the siege, Dalemir was severely wounded and was transported to Tarren Mill along with other soldiers who survived or deserted from the battlefield.

When Dalemir recovered he joined the city guards giving up the dangerous life of a mercenary. In the second year of service he, met a woman whom he fell in love with at first sight. He knew that he should not show it, after all, Patricia was the daughter of a rich and influential merchant.
One day when the girl did not come home from an afternoon ride. Her desperate father sent word to the guards, ordering them to find his daughter immediately. By capitalising on his experience from the siege of Durnholde, Dalemir separated from his unit and went into the forest. A few hours later, he found a frightened and frozen Sara, which he safely returned home. However, after such a time together, feelings which he had suppressed returned even stronger than before.

As a result of these events he accepted an offer from the merchant, left his service in the guard and started his work as a private bodyguard. This is when he began to meet in secret with his beloved Sara, who later became his wife and bore him two children.

Time passed and his life had stabilized. As he became a member of the merchant's family he abandoned the military profession and focused on family life. During this time, just like his father, he spent evenings in his office with a pen in hand; creating a lot of decent poems - which he planned to publish from "beyond the grave”.

This idyll ended with start of the Third War and the arrival of the scourge. Again, he applied to the army, sending his family away from the front under the protection of paid mercenaries. After several skirmishes, seeing the hopelessness of thier efforts to stop advancing enemies, Dalemir left the camp and set out to find his family.

After a long chase he finally caught up with the group of mercenaries he hired. He found them hidden in a forest camp, drunkenly celebrating. Charlton's mindset of determination thawed into a bloodthirsty rage barking to unleash from the inside and out, he knew that in this state, the group would not be able to defend themselves, let alone his wife and children. Then he heard a weak, feminine squeal. His eyes widened in surprise as he turned toward the grotto, a place where some of the mercenaries spent the night. Instinctively he rushed to the cave, completely unnoticed by the drunken mercenaries and bludgeoned a man to death, he pulled him off of the beaten woman. Dalemir fell on his knees to the unconscious girl and grabbed her by her arms; trying to cover her bloody body and whispered: "Sara". The woman, however, did not regain consciousness, and less than a quarter of an hour later, her heart stopped beating.

The next morning , sun rise shed light on the bodies of the murdered mercenaries. Charlton did not leave anyone alive. He buried the body of his beloved wife and then began searching for his children.
Something that would eventually lead to his downfall. After an unsuccessful search, which only affected his mentality, he finally started to fight back against the scourge. He was no longer afraid of dying and such wasthe drive for his lack of fear. He took refuge in the woods and started his hopeless contest, attacking smaller forces of the scourge and anyone who used war as a source of wealth. He became a guerrilla saboteur, in a slowly dying Silverpine Forest. Soon, as he gained more and more fame, people with an alligned vengeance joined his cause. However, as the entire region was deprived of support from the falling Lordaeron, Dalaran and Gilneas he finally died, defending another village, forgotten by the Light. Nevertheless he did not receive any promise of peace. His mind and body were deteriorating, and along with it; his memeories. The person known as Dalemir Charlton vanished like smoke in the winds. He was replaced by an empty shell of undead knight. After this the subsequent years were vague memories, the events seen from a side on which we have no influence. Mortimer was born another pawn of the Lich King.

This apathy lasted until the assault in Eastern Plaguelands, where Death Knights unleashed their destructive wrath on New Avalon and Havenshire. It was expected that the forces of the Scarlet Crusade were crushed under the Lich King’s fist. The batttle seemed more like a massacre, any Scarlet Crusaders that raised their guard to the forces of Arthas were met with no mercy. In the course of these events Mortimer was sent to execute prisoners. Mostly useless officers without any information. His sword rose and fell repeatedly, depriving their bodies of life; victimafter victimlost their heads to satisfy his addiction of inflicing pain and death. Then, suddenly he stopped. A soldier kneeling before him looked at him with hatred. The man’s eyes and facial features were familiar to Dalemir. Some of the long-erased memories started to return to him, the lost images of his wife and missing sons sustained themselves inside his weary mind. He stood above his captured son, it would seem that the power of these images has restored part of his humanity but then Dalemir uttered one sentence: ”We must all server him,” And drove his blade down on his son’s neck, finishing his work. Indifference and darkness returned and they remained until the liberation at Light's Hope Chapel.

After these events, the need for revenge was so great that Dalemir completely gave himself to Knights of the Ebon Blade and later, the Ashen Verdict. Like many other Death Knights he fought to the last day and the final fall of the Lich King. After the final battle in Icecrown Citadel he returned to Acherus, leaving the necropolis only when it was commanded of him.
He became haunted by his own mind and the flashbacks of the New Avalon battle. Over time, Dalemir has become bitter and filled with an intense contempt for all living creatures, envying them for the life he once possessed.

(English is not my first language) - Thank you in advance for your help!