tier is super important for enrage uptime and for an extended enrage window - i recommend checking out
http://www.mmo-champion.com/threads/...-Guide-amp-FAQ this guide written by archimtiros - he touches on everything there is to know about fury and its well written and broken down in chunks with drop down menus.
just looking at most of your openers you seem to be using odyns fury immediately after your battle cry, you shouldnt do that. you should start with an immediate rampage into draught - then i believe rb, bt, OF - though you dont have tier so it should be different for you.
without tier you are probably missing out on at least 200k dps alone, the benefits for fury are rather large with it than without
edit - also you have convergence, but the execute ring - i personally still feel like talenting frothing berserker is a better DPS gain overall, than massacre - you will reset BC more often and get the 10% frothing bonus quicker and more effective, while bc isnt readily available you just wait out the extra 15 rage. i may not be 100% accurate with this assumption and you may have to sim yourself with both talents to see which would yield better results right now.
also, from what i understand you want to be using old war over prolonged power.