Your paper sound like a Forum post rather than an Academic paper. I guess it is good that this is not a literature class assignment. It reads more like a rant than an analysis.
That said, I agree with what you are saying, however it doesn't come from a non-biased perspective. It focuses on the popular stories of these grievances, but doesn't do anything to talk about how these amendments can be used by those who are shown as victims in your write up. For example, the religious freedom amendment. Yes, Christians can deny people housing based on their beliefs, but would you also agree that a Muslim owner could also deny the same people housing for the same reasons? Or even an Atheist being able to deny anyone of any religion a place to live as it conflicts with their religious beliefs?