well saidNormally I don't do this but this video makes me feel like I have to...
1) Don't show useless clips of you running around
2) Clean up your UI
3) Don't make a whole video that is basically you going prem shadow ambush evis on people, even Grim and Maydie showed different stuff. And they were big on crit videos.
4) The blood spatter is useless and only hinders your view, remove it or lower it to like 50%
5) Don't show yourself ganking people who honestly have no chance even if you were a brain dead keyboard turner to win. Do you find a video of a level 10 killing level 5 mobs fun? No you don't, show videos of people with equal gear.
6) Get a new spec, combat preferred. No you will not just Killing Spree people down. Your sub spec doesn't allow anyone to enjoy the video, it with your UI makes all the fights uneventful.
7) Wear greens or maybe a full shadowcraft set. The days of pvp videos were a guy just out-gears everyone and people eat it all up is in the distant past(vanilla). People want to see the underdog or at least a guy fighting people with equal gear to him. And even then they don't want to see a 6 second fight. Its just not enjoyable to watch some guy run around ganking people that have no chance.
8) Keybind your cooldowns you look goofy when you click them and you're losing focus by having to look at them instead of the guy killing you.
9) Don't finish the pvp movie in a day. What the good videos do is they pvp for many days and look through all their fights and pick the ones that have a) good enemies b) a disadvantage to them c) showing off their skill like vanishing death coil or handling a healer while killing everyone else.
10) Look at your video when you're finished with it, I highly doubt you looked at it from a strangers point of view or you would've made most of the changes I mentioned here.