when I say bloat I don’t mean things like the over explaining details I mean just like Matt and Rands trip to Caemlyn where it drags on and on as they stop or try to stop at like 15 different farms/inns and half of them do nothing to actually characterize them or detail the world.
Like I think atleast 4 of them end with them being cased off turn away or given some stuff to leave because Matt is getting more corrupted and is acting like a jerk and this isn’t counting the bigger/impactful times. It’s like they thought people wouldn’t notice the more subtle hints of corruption on the boat or that they would forget mid journey even though there were were more impactful moments show casing it and it’s progress so they just beat you over the head with it.
I’m also not saying that the book should be shorter or any thing like that, just that there is a lot of bloat you could cut out and dedicate to other story/character elements like say Perrin who is a pretty non existent character for most of the book outside of his small part with the wolfs/tinkers, or better yet alot more Lann/Nynaeve who while they have my favourite parts in the book there actual “romance” near the end is rather sudden/rushed.