Again. While Hayden is clearly not the best actor... The script/time is what sunk the story.
Writing a character study is pretty easy so long as you follow the basics.
Problems with the character study:
Episode 1: The prequels are about anikin rise and fall. In the first movie he is a 12 year old child. Even 12 year old children don't relate to 12 year old children. How do you expect an audience of 16-35 year old's to? Children are alien to the average viewer because they are illogical, annoying, and are usually written as "not understanding what the adults are talking about". Its difficult for the viewer to experience the story vicariously through the main character if even the main character does not understand the events and thus immersion is broken.
IE: As luke learns... We learn. We feel that moment of awe as he does when yoda lifts the xwing.
I feel like even lucas understood this and that's why anikin could have been a cardboard cut out for most of the movie. Especially since he wasn't in the first hour of the movie. Even when he is around he is either in a naboo fighter or pod racer splurting out one liners that make us all more upset that he is a child.
"So what, anikin isn't the main character of episode 1. Obiwan is" Great. Then why have an episode 1 if the prequels are about anikin? Furthermore, if the movie is about obiwan what character development do we see? Nothing. Even when quigon dies he gets angery for all of about 4 minutes then goes back to being serene and it is never brought up or plays a part in the series ever again. Obiwan experiences no development.
Episode 2: Anikin is already pessimistic, angry, and creepy. In this part of a character study we are suppose to be getting to know an idealistic young man (not megalomaniac) who believes in the jedi code and the republic (not killing 60/60 sand people for the bonus quest). We are suppose to become attached to him as he struggles against seemingly unbeatable odds
IE: luke destroying the deathstar.
Instead we are given conflicting messages. We are TOLD he is good while being shown him acting evil. This defeats the purpose of the character study. If you are trying to tell a dramatic story about the rise and fall of a jedi, a paragon of justice and light, you need to make us care during the rise so the its dramatic when he falls. There is no rise. Just a whiny bitch with a high miticlorine count and a license to kill. The second movie served no purpose.
Episode 3: This movie, had it not been for the other two? Would have been passable as the prequel. I know people have serious issues with this movie. I don't care. If lucas had just made this movie we would have been like "oh. Cool." you know. except for
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2xQQm_4FdEc
I feel like Episode 3 could have used some better writing but its scifi. What do you really expect? Ill tell you. More then episode 1 and 2.