1. #8921
    Quote Originally Posted by Mehman View Post
    I really need to learn to write less or I'm not gonna get done with this essay.. I just wrote about 500 words and it can basicly be summed up into "and then a mage appeared". Seriously, if this gets anywhere near what I'd call done by tommorow, I won't have gotten any sleep.
    If you wrote 500 words to describe a "mage appearing", you need to use less description. Have a very avid description isn't a bad thing, but you CAN have too much. Once you get to the point where it's just annoying to read because just one small scene is overly descriptive, it isn't worth it. If there is one thing I learned from the bronycon fan fiction panel, it's "show and tell". Try to SHOW what's happening, not tell.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Worer View Post
    =))=))=)):)):)):))
    I will murder you


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    Quote Originally Posted by Worer View Post
    ))))))))))))))))))))
    xaxaxaxaxaxaxa

  4. #8924
    Quote Originally Posted by Coffer View Post
    I will murder you
    I'm liking this idea!

    * Cute and adorable 'don't murder me' face



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    * Boops everypony

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    Quote Originally Posted by Theklocko View Post
    If you wrote 500 words to describe a "mage appearing", you need to use less description. Have a very avid description isn't a bad thing, but you CAN have too much. Once you get to the point where it's just annoying to read because just one small scene is overly descriptive, it isn't worth it. If there is one thing I learned from the bronycon fan fiction panel, it's "show and tell". Try to SHOW what's happening, not tell.
    I know, there have been other things happening, but that's still the gist of what I spent 500 words explaining.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Daginni View Post
    OH look. It's Charcoal Pillow.
    Hello adorable wall eyed origami crane!

    Quote Originally Posted by Naro View Post
    It be dat Anassi!

    Hai!
    It is dat Naro! Ohai!!!


    In other news: I'll be gone now. Take care and see you laters!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Daginni View Post
    I'm liking this idea!

    * Cute and adorable 'don't murder me' face


    [IMG]http://scranton.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/rsz/mlfw8043_medium.png[IMG]
    With such a face, how CAN'T you murderlize it!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Alaitoc View Post
    xaxaxaxaxaxaxa
    XDDDDDDDDDDD
    Quote Originally Posted by Coffer View Post
    I will murder you
    Pls have mercy

  10. #8930
    Quote Originally Posted by Shaedris View Post
    * Boops everypony
    * Hops, skips and tactical boops Shaedris



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    Quote Originally Posted by Shaedris View Post
    * Boops everypony
    Well that's not very nice of you.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Daginni View Post
    * Hops, skips and tactical boops Shaedris


    [IMG]http://denver.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw7539-FillyDerpy.icantstopwatchingit_77470b_3990615.gif[/IfMG]
    Tactically? o_o

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    Quote Originally Posted by Daginni View Post
    * Hops, skips and tactical boops Shaedris


    [IMG]http://denver.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw7539-FillyDerpy.icantstopwatchingit_77470b_3990615.gif[/IG]

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    Quote Originally Posted by Worer View Post
    Pls have mercy
    I'd make you scrub all the floors in Hyrule but I'm busy watching KnK.


  15. #8935
    Quote Originally Posted by Anassi View Post
    Hello adorable wall eyed origami crane!!
    NAILED IT!


  16. #8936
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    Quote Originally Posted by Coffer View Post
    I'd make you scrub all the floors in Hyrule but I'm busy watching KnK.
    le scrub monkey third class faic

  17. #8937
    Quote Originally Posted by Mehman View Post
    I know, there have been other things happening, but that's still the gist of what I spent 500 words explaining.
    You're so silly mehmy.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Daginni View Post
    NAILED IT!

    [IMG]http://video.planetgreen.discovery.com/green-guides/at-work/overflowing-trash-can-wasted-paper-photo.jpg[/IMdG]
    The text and the caption do not agree.

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  19. #8939
    Quote Originally Posted by Shaedris View Post
    Take away the finger and you got Blackjack Scrunchy Face.

    But she also doesn't look like she enjoy boops...


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    Quote Originally Posted by Theklocko View Post
    You're so silly mehmy.
    Well.. Yeah. I am. Suprised?

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