Hey people! So I decided I wanted to start making YouTube videos for fun. I don't care so much about subscribers yet (but i will eventually) so I am just looking for some tips. I already know not to touch my face so much and not to move much on camera. I also plan on cutting more for my next video. Here's my sample. What's your take on it? Is it good, bad, funny... And any criticism is good criticism!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tKxP-XuDbGk