I wrote a song. Pure AC DC style. Heavy riffs and stuff. The main character is Jesus Christ and he sings about his last temptation and execution in first person. It came to my mind that after all it could insult some catholic people. I could record a demo or something to be more concrete, and still I am concerned about the song context. Any thoughts?
Edit: added first verse and chorus
I didn't want to get in trouble
I didn't want to go away so young
Nevertheless they found me guilty
For words of love and wisdom slipping off my tongue
This is the end
My last temptation
One stab
Body hits the ground
Lend me your hand
Seeking salvation
My love
Will never let you down