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    A fine victory, and a blow dealt to the Forsaken. Vengeance moved with the Gilneas...

    A fine victory, and a blow dealt to the Forsaken. Vengeance moves with the Gilneas Brigade! x10000000


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    There is nothing wrong with "A fine victory, and a blow dealt to the Forsaken."

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    Quote Originally Posted by Daetur View Post
    There is nothing wrong with "A fine victory, and a blow dealt to the Forsaken."
    "and" does not go after commas
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    Quote Originally Posted by skannerz22 View Post
    "and" does not go after commas
    Except it does.

    These are two independent clauses in a sense, in which case a comma is mandatory.

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    Quote Originally Posted by skannerz22 View Post
    "and" does not go after commas
    Except for all the times it does, especially when used more loosely to denote spoken delivery and imply pauses.

    Grammatically speaking, when a coordinating conjunction is used to connect two independent clauses, a comma is always used. Examples:

    I hit my brother with a stick, and he cried.
    The rain stopped, and the sun came out again.

    To put it more simply, if the two statements in the sentence can be independent sentences, there should be a comma. So, "A fine victory." and "A blow dealt to the Forsaken." can be distinct sentences in their own right, just like "I hit my brother with a stick." and "He cried.", above.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Daetur View Post
    Except for all the times it does, especially when used more loosely to denote spoken delivery and imply pauses.

    Grammatically speaking, when a coordinating conjunction is used to connect two independent clauses, a comma is always used. Examples:

    I hit my brother with a stick, and he cried.
    The rain stopped, and the sun came out again.
    well then all the fucking teachers at school were morons for marking my work wrong for doing exactly that..^^^
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    Quote Originally Posted by skannerz22 View Post
    "and" does not go after commas
    This is wrong, there are situations, like this one, where a comma before the and is correct.

    Its called a coordinating conjunction connecting two independent subclauses, since the second clause does not depend on the first one.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tehterokkar View Post
    That's a different case than this. The serial comma or Oxford comma needs at least three items in the sentence, and doesn't apply here.

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    Quote Originally Posted by skannerz22 View Post
    well then all the fucking teachers at school were morons for marking my work wrong for doing exactly that..^^^
    I had the same problem with teachers and the Oxford comma.

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    Quote Originally Posted by skannerz22 View Post
    "and" does not go after commas
    Using the Shatner Comma, any word can go before or after a comma as long as it over-dramatizes the situation, or if you need to stick your belly back into your pants while talking.

    A fine, vitory, and, a blow dealt, to the, forsaken.

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    Quote Originally Posted by skannerz22 View Post
    well then all the fucking teachers at school were morons for marking my work wrong for doing exactly that..^^^
    Teachers being morons isn't an unusual occurrence!

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    Quote Originally Posted by One-Of-Many View Post
    Using the Shatner Comma, any word can go before or after a comma as long as it over-dramatizes the situation, or if you need to stick your belly back into your pants while talking.

    A fine, vitory, and, a blow dealt, to the, forsaken.
    Pretty much this.

    Utilising a comma during speech just indicates a slight pause.
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