Originally Posted by
Caine
Alternative is on another level in feels department. Before I read it I never thought a hardcore, brutal tentacle rape and body transformation scene could serve as anything more than niche porn and/or shock scene... Here though? I felt like crying.
Being Shirogane is suffering in general. Starting from the OmNomNom, it was a series of constant ups and downs, with downs being worse and worse. Panicked in combat? Don't worry, Marimo will comfort yoCHOMP! Well, at least you can run back home... You're just gonna vanish from everyone's memories, cause Marimo's death again, turn Sumika into a vegetable after screwing with her mind... and kill who knows how many people - after all BETA killed billions, he could have brought all of that fate with him as well. Wanna go back? Sure! Here's a robot made out of your beloved, wanna hear what BETA did to her? And just so you know, everyone you begin to rely on will die one after another. And to crown it all, your entire squad's gonna die off to protect you while your lover is inevitably and slowly dying in the background without your knowledge - after all, if you knew you would stop hastening her demise more and more. Just make sure you smile for the cameras when you carry her body out of that shuttle!
Fuck. I just felt bad for the man.
He did go through an amazing amount of character development, though. I can't count how many times over Unlimited and Alternative I thought "Well, THIS time he grew up and manned up." - slowly progressing from a kid getting hard over piloting a mecha to a reliable, veteran soldier. Aside from story itself(duh.), his character development is probably what made me fall in love with Alternative.
There's MuvLuv Altered Fable by the way, currently in process of translation. From what I've seen it's Extra that plays out after Alternative - in the world he ended up in after everything passed.