[Music] If you are into trance..

[zealtek]

Hey guys I produce music and I made my first trance song today. I would love some feedback if you guys have time. Thanks! and enjoy

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q_xT-W8Ei1M

http://www.facebook.com/pages/Cruz4der/203672476333688

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It stops very suddenly...
It sounds good, though. Although the beginning doesn't sound trance-like at all. I would have skipped till 0:30 and started the song there, instead of beginning with some clap and snare (? not sure about the right terms, haven't touched Fruity Loops in ages).

I really like the part that starts at 2:00

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Change up the drums a bit, a loop which lasts the whole way through the song doesn't sound great. Also what the above poster said, cut the first 30 seconds. Also add some more melodies and stuff, or just introduce some new sounds into the mix, grab some fresh VSTs.

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Quite a reasonable effort, its definately got potential
Not sure its a trance tune tho :P more like a progressive house number

[Deleted]

Most commercial trance has 30+ seconds of just a beat as intro. This makes it 10x easier to make a continuous mix as a DJ.

I know. Cafe del Mar has a 5-minute intro before the song actually starts, but I don't skip the first 5 minutes there, since it fits the song. But the start from this song just doesn't fit the rest of the song. ^^