Hey there, I just recently started a LP channel over on youtube. Things are getting off to a slow start, but I am now in the groove of putting up roughly 3 videos every day. I would love to have some opinions of what people think both good and bad (most of the people who have watched it are people I know from school and such, can't trust them for REAL opinions).
Here is a link to the channel http://www.youtube.com/user/MrSayier. Currently I have videos of Fallout New Vegas and Minecraft custom maps up. I have some plans for future projects (assuming the channel ever gets off the ground) including some WoW stuff.
Sorry if this is not the correct place for this but this seemed like the best place to start (-_-')
Sounds like you need a script, Too many "urms" and needless swearing. I also think you need to wait for your voice to mature a bit before doing voiceovers, sorry for being so negative, i am just giving my honest opinion.