Originally Posted by
eschatological
He cast 46 KCs in 585s. Considering it's a 6s CD, his max would have been 97. missing more than half your KCs will crush your DPS. Granted, on Vizier there's some downtime travelling between platforms, but on Gara'jal he had 28 in 266s (highest uptime log he has, Gara'jal is funky). Max in a 266s fight should be around 44.
That's a whole hell of a lot of DPS he's missing right there. I like to play BM at rather high focus - SV plays at a lower focus level, imo, because of the low costs of ES, the frequency of LnLs, and the fact that you're often playing with ToTH, leading to free ASs and thus not much focus spending at all. With BM you traditionally run with DB (which he is) which is a much more even flow of focus, and KC is higher focus, and you have a higher max focus of 120 - really the only unpredictable focus incoming is from invigoration, at 20 focus, so you can play around 100 focus and be fine since you have so much going out the door every 6s.
He got 150 ticks of AMoC (30 ticks per cast, a full 5 casts of it). In a 585s fight, he should have one ~0s, ~30s (due to Readiness), ~150s, ~270, ~390 (this is 6m30, he should using Readiness again after this), ~420, 540, so that's a full 2 casts of AMoC he's missing. Even if he readiness's at 5m to double RF, he should have (0, 30, 150, 270, Readiness off CD ~300 so AMoC latest by ~310, 430, 550, for 7 again).
RF usage should be @ ~0, ~20ish, ~200, ~380 (then Readiness), ~400 at the latest, ~580 for the end, so 6 RFs. He has 3. RF has a reduced benefit for BM since haste blows, but auto shot IS our 2nd highest source of non-pet damage, and he did over 3.1m in auto shot, and RF will boost that for double the time he's getting currently.
Also, he cast Focus Fire 7 times. I don't know the consensus on this, but I generally hold my 5 stacks of frenzy instead of consuming it, unless it looks like the stack is going to fall off - in a fight like Vizier I might use Focus Fire twice, on platform transitions. Having a 5 stack increases your pet's attack speed and it does a lot of damage especially at higher mastery levels - whereas Focus Fire only makes your auto shot/cobra shot faster with a 1 time focus boost to your pet, none of which really lines up with anything we're gearing for in terms of stats.
Also, I don't know how WoL is treating Glaive Toss these days, but he's got at worst 4 casts of it, at best 8. It's a 15s CD, and on a single target he should still be using it on CD as it's a higher damage for lower focus cost than AS. Two glaives can crit for the same as a KC crit. It's well worth using. NEedless to say in a 585s fight, he should have almost 40.
Basically, tl;dr: press more buttons.