why don't you use DP/LH for fallen protectors?
You have only one hit of SoR during the fight, SoR is really worth swapping to imo when you get into the Sun transition due to how many adds are active.
Also not enough censure damage, you're aware that you can have 5 stacks running on all of them at the same time.
The time between your first two HoW's on norushen is 6 seconds, why is that?
Your opener is kind of odd, its a waste of time/gcd's popping wings/GoAK on pull but waiting til 4 seconds to use inquisition. Use the holy pvp 4 pc before pulls in order to start the fight with 5 holy power and not waste abilities ESPECIALLY inside Wings that arent effected by 30% more damage, it maybe 4 seconds, but those 4 seconds matter.
You also either don't use your pot prepull, or don't use your second potion on a lot of these fights.
You didnt even use Seal of Truth on Sha of Pride
again, no LH for Galakras?
You did pretty okay on IJ as far as DPS is concerned.
As far as everything past that your performance seems to be okay. But your DPS especially @ a 577 item level seems to be below average.