Dontrike/Shadow Priest/Black Cell Faction Friend Code - 5172-0967-3866
It was a compliment! I swear!
I, at least, think it is.
But your reader will not contemplate on the personality of the pony if you do not feed them information that will make them love her. I openly admit, for the first like 20 pages I thought Zephyr was a dude because the way she is written. Only through Whimsy's dialog did I deduce that she was in fact female.
I'm not saying that you should re-write it or anything, not at all - It's probably just me failing at catching what's behind the words. But it's something to think about, and a tip if I could ever give one.
I wonder if art is made to accomplish anything meaningful. I've always considered art to be a conversation without words, at least when it comes to status/paintings/classical music etc., and even when it comes to music and prose/literature, it's not about how many love it, but about how much you love it. As a reader.
One of my favorite books is a little danish book series called "Skammeren's Datter", made by a woman no-one outside of Denmark knows. But I still love them so much, because they captured everything that meant anything to me. Would I love it more if everyone in the thread had read it? No. It would be easier to talk about, but sometimes words unspoken are the most honest ones.
What I'm trying to say is, if you write this to please someone other than yourself, I think you're going to hit way more bumps in the road than you normally would, and I think it will become harder and harder to write (And even harder to finish, if I should draw some personal experience into this).
You say you love the fic so much, and can't stop thinking about it, but still you're questioning if it's worthwhile? I don't get that logic.
Have a pony to remind us all why we're even having this discussion: We love ponies!
So it looks like JJ Abrams is going to direct Star Wars episode 7
http://www.thewrap.com/movies/articl...xclusive-74596
"Would you please let me join your p-p-party?
So I'm awake.. Probably shouldn't be, but oh well.
Dontrike/Shadow Priest/Black Cell Faction Friend Code - 5172-0967-3866
Dontrike/Shadow Priest/Black Cell Faction Friend Code - 5172-0967-3866
Dontrike/Shadow Priest/Black Cell Faction Friend Code - 5172-0967-3866
Dontrike/Shadow Priest/Black Cell Faction Friend Code - 5172-0967-3866
19KB pretty much the max, enjoy lol
Dontrike/Shadow Priest/Black Cell Faction Friend Code - 5172-0967-3866