dont wanna sound like a dick or anything, but this isnt really even a 'guide' it is just copy pasta, I may be jaded cuz I've played a warr at high lvl since lvl 60, but there is nothing remotely interesting in here, I find more useful info in any regular EJ thread.
anyways, A for effort looks like you put a lot of time into it.
More focus on actual game play would majorly improve this. getting right into the nitty gritty of a proper rotation.
seriously, 4 mobs ... rend and Tclap ?! what arms warr spec blood and thunder?! dont go mis informing people new to the class with rubbish like this.