Originally Posted by
Skulltaker
I agree with you on SW always having commentary. But I (personally) feel that the previous movies, the original trilogy definitly, wrapped it better than TLJ. It never felt this strongly on the nose. Of course, this might be due to the times we live in, and political debates among civilians being much more heated and a lot more aggressive than they used to be.
TLJ is very much a product of its time. Thats not an excuse for bad writing, though. I'm fine with Star Wars trying out new things like a fuel shortage (even though it has never been an issue befor, but, first time for everything), but you cannot create a sense of threat from being hunted down and cornered if people are constantly leaving and joining the chased party. I'm fine with there being a comment on 'weapons dealers are scum', but it comes out of nowhere and doesn't further the plot, it distracts, and giving the imense pressure that is supposed to be there, it is weird (not to say stupid) for Rose to suddenly draw attention to them by trying to free some stupid horses.
Which brings me to another big issue. Every problem the characters in TLJ face is 100% brought upon them by themselves. They are having trouble due to incompetence.
When the first Death Star approaches Yavin, Leia knew they'd be followed, but it was a necessary evil - it was either leave the plans with the Empire and die, killing all hope, or a slim chance for the Rebellion to destroy the Death Star at Yavin. When the Rebels are caught in a trap at the Battle of Endor, it was due to them underestimating the Empreror and his willingness to risk his new battlestation to lure them into a trap. They were outplayed, but perseverence, luck, the Force, Luke succeeding with Darth Vader and some furry imbeciles helped them to get on top.
Fin and Rose, on the other hand, are just dumb (or rather, their writing is dumb). They park their ship on the middle of a beach. Whats wrong with landing on a landing pad? It'd be closer, and as far as we know, they are not wanted by the people on Canto Bright. Also, what was their plan to convince the code breaker to go with them? "Yeah, we can't offer you any money, will storm the flagship of these ruthless lunatic turbo-fascists that blew up an entire Star System a week ago, and we have no plan how to escape from there once that is achieved. You in?" "Yeah... no. I'll stay here and keep drinking blue champagne. Best of luck to you." Why would a faceless guy care about them?
The First Order only has a need to pursue the Raddus and the following ships, becasue the commander of the Dreadnought is a fucking moron. Shoot the base? Why? Shoot the starships. The base isn't going anywhere! Get some intel! Get some prisoners, maybe!
Why is the FO officer that monitors the Supremacys shields not more dilligent in his work? He has a fucking huge responsibility. "Ah, sir, it might be nothing, but there was a flicker in the shields, someone might have snuck on board, we have thousands of personel on board, maybe check if there is an intruder?" What if Fin and Rose had simply decided to bomb the main reactor? Star Wars heroes have often succeded due to the bad guys underestimating a potential threat, but this guy literally has one job. I mean, the three Star Destroyers ramming into each other in ESB was pretty dumb, but damn. They got tunnelvisioned because Darth Vader was breathing down their neck.
And pulling some random vice admiral out of your ass, that acts as if she hasn't ever commanded anyhting but the rubber duck in her bathtub, surely didn't help.
The Resistance is being persued by the fleet. Why not split up their remaining crew in the three remaining ships and jump each to a different location? 2/3 of them would survive. Heck, they could even fake splitting them and move all onto one ship and escape. Of course, there's a chance the Empire will track the right ship, but still, its better then slowly moving towards a potential safe haven. What was the idea when they got there? They were moving in a straight line the entire time, are you telling me noone in the FO figured out where they went? And then they wanted to call for allies? Really? They have enough Allies to challange the Supremacy and the Star Destroyers that excort her? Then why is the FO a problem to begin with?
Leia calling back the Bombers was idiotic aswell. They were in position to attack a major asset. How long would it have taken to recover them from an attack position and get away from the FO fleet? The only part of the story that was interesting and well written was the part around Rey and Ben. And that part of the movie, I enjoyed. But there was so much bullshit thrown inbetween that kept distracting you from the actual story that it makes the movie impossible to enjoy.