Criticize The Artist Above You!

[MisterSheep]

Rules are simple:

-Write a critique for the artist above you. What is good about their art? What part should they work more on? Etc.

-Post a link to some of your artwork. It must be done by you.

-You can post multiple time, but you can't critcize someone more than once.

-Be polite. An advice or two hurts no one, but no bashing.


As i started this thread, i'll show you my gallery!

[ghostkitteh]

There's really nothing I can contribute because I'm not an artist (I can cook if that counts ), but I felt the need to tell you that you have some amazing work.

[MisterSheep]

Thanks a lot ^^ very kind of you! Hehe, cooking is an art too!

I thought these forums were filled with artists, i'm surprised this thread isn't getting any more replies

[ghostkitteh]

The forums don't tend to be the most active on weekends, especially during the evening. Give it a few more days, and I'm sure there'll be quite a few people who've posted.

[Splenda]

My dA link is in my sig I'm not good at all, but whatever :P I'm not terrible!

[Deleted]

You need to do some more practice, you should start with the lines. :P Also the depth, etc

here's my dA, i sometimes(like once in a year) post some shit i made in photoshop.
http://worer.deviantart.com/gallery/

I've done many more, actually, but I'm too lazy to post them on that site.

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/77947262/Al...Untitled-1.png
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/77947262/Al...igs/sayaka.png
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/77947262/Al...sfafafgaga.png
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/77947262/Al.../makasigv2.png
etc

[MisterSheep]

I like your style, though i wouldn't be able to point out anything wrong about those, as i'm not much into sigs and such. But keep it up!

Here's my gallery again for the next person http://xeolan.deviantart.com/gallery/

[Nyuun]

Guess I could use some critique that isn't full-on hate :c

See sig. Second one down if you're feeling adventurous.

Warning: Gallery contains a lot of NSFW art

[Spin86]

I like it Nyuun. It's not really my style but i guess other people really might be going for it. From my point of view, you could improve on shading in general. But then again, maybe that's your style and you intend it to look that way. I tend to aim for more realism when i do my occasional digital painting.

I don't have enough postings for links yet, but my dev-art id is spin86, should be no problem to put the url together. spin86.deviantart.com if i remember right.

[MisterSheep]

@ Nyuun I really love your gallery, and i envy your coloring! Much like me though, you are a bit better at drawing girls than guys, your gallery could use more male characters. I must admit i got my own load of pervy drawing, but none that are uploaded on dA though! ;P You've got a lot of drawing pratice, and it does show off! I wish i had more free time to do the same, i only started doing digital work a few months ago, i need more pratice if i ever want to catch up with you


@Spin86 You seem to have a lot of ease with colors and more artistic effects, though i'd love to see some full-body drawing! Those pictures are jaw-dropping! I'm a huge fan of such landscape!