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    Bio - Anchorite Aalena.

    Name: Aalena.

    Race: Draenei.

    Class: Anchorite (Priest).

    Age: Definite date unknown, but was born before the fall of Argus. Roughly 25010 years old.

    Birthplace: Argus.

    Alignment: Lawful Good.

    Affiliation: Draenei, Alliance, Aldor, Sha'tar, Shattered Sun Offensive, Argent Crusade.

    Relatives: Parents - Tavuun and Falaana (Both deceased).

    Strengths: Powerful Light-wielding abilities, sharp mind and knowledgeable.

    Weaknesses: Disability in the form of her being blind.

    Current Location: The Exodar.

    Appearance: http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/2...riteaalena.jpg

    Personality: Stern, knowledgeable, a friendly atmosphere around her, but can be threatening when required. Overall a gentle being, and quite selfless.

    Biography:
    Aalena was but a child when the Legion first visited her people. Her mother and father were both followers of Velen, and this led to their departure from their home planet. Due to her age at the time, she could not remember what exactly happened during those events. All that she could remember was that a powerful being decieved her people, and they were now exiles. During the milennia long search for a new home, Aalena began learning of the Light. As her people became devout folowers of the entity, so did she. Aboard the dimensional vessel, which her people used to leave their home, she was taught by the high priests, anchorites and Naaru the ways of the Light.

    Due to her weak melee skill, she was not able to advance to a vindicator, and instead followed the path of the anchorite - a powerful priest, as it was known to other races. Her magical use was highly proficient, and she rose through the ranks, becoming one of the most powerful Light-wielders amongst her people. She was even recognised by Velen, and congratulated on her feat. The Draenei - as they were now known - travelled from world to world in search of a new haven. The search was hopeless, for the Legion was right behind them. Eventually, after years of travelling, the Draenei settled on a planet. This planet was named Draenor by her people, or also known as "Exiles' Refuge", in her language. Finally, the Legion had been evaded, and they found a new home.

    There was one other race which resided on this planet - the Orcs. Both races kept to themselves, however they did trade, which led to a peaceful relationship. As the Draenei grew and built up on their new homeworld, everything was perfect. Aalena travelled to the Temple of Karabor, which was Velen's own refuge, and continued her training. However, the peace was not to last. Her people were eventually discovered, and by manipulating the nearby Orcs, the Legion attacked the Draenei. Aalena was still residing in the Temple when it was besieged by Orcs. She valiantly defended, but it was hopeless. The Orcs were winning, and she and the other remnants fled.

    Word had reached them of a new sanctuary in the swamps of Zangarmarsh. The remainders travelled there, and they then fully saw what was left of them, and what toll their people had taken from this attack. Aalena had at this moment heard of her parents murder, and was disgusted at how cruel and malicious the Legion truly was. At this moment, she swore that she would fight using the virtues of the Light, and shall protect all from the Legion's reign of terror. The remnants of the Draenei lived at this safe refuge for over a decade, untill finally, Velen had decreed that they would retake one of Tempest Keep's satellites: The Exodar. Velen personally led a raid to retake the vessel from the newly arrived Blood Elves, and Aalena was enthusiastic to assist.

    The fighting was long, but eventually they wrestled control over the ship. They prepared to planeshift to leave the planet, but the Blood Elves had already tampered with the ship's engine. The Exodar hurtled through the Twisting Nether, eventually crash landing on the Azuremyst Isles. Aalena was in the main part of the ship during the crash, and this took a toll on her. Aalena was forever blinded by this event, her eyes gouged by crystals. She managed to save herself by healing and praying to the Light, but her eyes were permanently damaged. She searched for the other survivors, but she could not be helped. She was a proficient Light-wielder, but with this scarring, she was hopeless. Eventually she was found by Velen, and the Prophet helped her. She tried using his Light blessed abilities to heal her, but it was ineffective.

    Following this, Aalena secluded herself from the others, feeling useless and pathetic. Yet, one day, Velen searched for her. Upon finding her, sealed away in an abandoned area of the vessel, he shared an idea which he had. Velen then accompanied Aalena as well as his shield guards to Shattrath City. The massive Naaru, A'dal, blessed the doubtful Aalena. She was given a new ability, which was named Light Vision. She was still permanently blinded, but she could sense her surroundings, and could see if someone was faithful to the light and what good existed in them. She then joined the Sha'tar of Shattrath, honing her Light blessed abilities, and pefecting every technique she knew, so that she would become a formidable opponent.

    Aalena resided in Shattrath City for a long time, also partially joining the Aldor, and gaining tutelage from Ishanah. However, when news arrived of the Blood Elven Lord, Kael'thas, summoning Kil'jaeden into Azeroth, nothing could hold her back. She was accepted into a new faction named the Shattered Sun Offensive, and assited in the disruption of Kil'jaeden's summoning. She was happy to have been involved in this, fighting for her people, for the blood that had been shed, and also personal revenge for her disablity and for her parents. Following this, she returned to the Exodar, and assted in its reconstruction. Her disability had become more of a gift, making her unique, and she helped in any way that she could.

    Aalena had fully been accepted as an anchorite, and then soon after, left for Northrend. Recently, news had been heard of the Lich King attacking both the Horde and Alliance. Even if she had slight disgust for the Horde, she had partially forgiven them regarding the circumstances. Upon leaving for the frozen continent, she wanted to assit in bringing down a former agent of the Legion. Upon her arrival, she heard of a faction of Priests and Paladins, named the Argent Crusade. This group of Light followers were planning on dethroning and bringing the Lich King to justice, and she was thrilled to be of assistance. She remained with the faction for the duration of the stay in Northrend and even assited with the destruction of Arthas.

    With all of her business done, the anchorite returned to The Exodar. She set up new home there, further perfecting her skills as well as her use of her Light Vision. She had become a formidable opponent, and she was to pass on her gift to further students who wished to follow. Velen had also requested of her, and she gained the rank of the Prophet's advisor. Life was finally turning around, and the future of her people was looking good. They had finally found a proper home, full of peace, safety, and justice.
    Last edited by ELYPOP; 2010-08-08 at 01:18 AM.

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    I... don't have anything to say. It fits spot on with the Lore and you have a brilliant phrasing!

    Welcome to the world of RP! (btw, age-wise I'd be lenient towards about 25010 years of age as that is RIGHT before the arrival of the Burning legion and because you stated that she doesn't remember much due to being young, she has to be VERY young (1-10 years of age) for this to be plausible. Apart from that, everything is just magnificent!

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    Thanks for the comment. Finally tried something different with a character, instead of Blood Elf Mages. :P

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    Quote Originally Posted by Elyaan-Amuno View Post
    Thanks for the comment. Finally tried something different with a character, instead of Blood Elf Mages. :P
    Haha, yeah, there seems to be quite a few of those, mainly due to the fact that they are easy to create
    Can't wait to have you join in on a thread!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Elyaan-Amuno View Post
    Thanks for the comment. Finally tried something different with a character, instead of Blood Elf Mages. :P
    That is always good missy.

    ---------- Post added 06-23-2010 at 12:09 PM ----------

    But I have always loved your bios. Keep up the great work!
    Quote Originally Posted by Mortis Darkskull View Post
    1st south park garots... now happy garots... next one must be overdramatic seinen manga garots...
    Best of 5 years!

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    Thanks Garots. All feedback is appreciated.

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