Heya!
As some of you might know by now, i'm running RhoninDiaries.com. Now i've recently added the newest (still being written-)book "Retcon".
I'd like some serious feedback on it. Remember; It's about function and readable idea, not about what is written (well, that too but that isn't in my hands =p).
Also; Should i rewrite and make things said by characters in italic?
Thanks in advance.