Originally Posted by
Zinge
Since you linked only Paragons, I'm assuming you just want feedback for that.
Paragons is a hardcore padding fight, so it's hard to get an accurate look depending on the environment in your guild, but she is doing a number of things wrong. Her dot uptime is really low. SWP could be better and VT is only at 56%... Her Insanity damage is also low; she's probably having a tough time managing multi-dotting and getting insanity casts off. Another thing that is kind of stumping me with these logs is that her miss percentages are strangely high. I know that whenever Karoz goes to hurl amber, he goes immune, which would explain some, but not what she's showing. Make sure she's at 14.9x% or higher hit percentage when she puts her real helm on.
What to do (for Paragons only): She can keep using ToF since it's passive. She should drop Insanity for FDCL. What this means--she needs to double dot all 3 targets (FDCL is procced by only VT, so if your guild frowns on padding, she should just do VT). This will basically force her to learn how to keep dots up for procs, and, in the end, increase her terrible VT uptime substantially.
If she plays well in that gear, she can likely get somewhere around 300-325k. You should tell her to aim for 260k+