Rath Bloodmoon BIO

[Rivalfenix]

(New here, and ya. My Character BE Blood Knight. Rath Bloodmoon's life in a Summary)
Name: Rath Bloodmoon

Age: Around 119?

Race: Blood Elf

Gender: Male

Class: Blood Knight

Appearance:Rath has charcoal slant spiky hair, a tattoo on his back that is a moon with blood drips, and wears leather (assassination set with tints of red, and a slight bulk to it.) hanged onto the leather are small plating to keep his protection at a moderate rate when needed to. When it comes to the battlefield, and controlling situations he would be wearing his standard Blood Knight plate armor, or his own style of plating from adventures he went on. He also wields the Bloodmourn a Bloodmoon family heirloom.

Personaility: Emotionless, Calm, Collective, Hot headed when fused is light up, Mainly serious

Likes: Experimenting with Mana, Strawberry Chocolate <3, Fighting, Likes to do a strange acrobatic dance, likes to stay at a low profile,

Dislikes: Being the "Leader" figure, Scourge,

Strengths: His strengths in battle would probably be his ability to control mana, and the Light. His skills in using swords since he was taught by a Swordmaster. Learning to be graceful, and stealthy on the battlefield buff his potential to becoming an Assassin figure. Last of all his speed, because his main attire is leather, he uses speed, with mixture of some plate on the leather to be his defensive.

Weaknesses: Protecting the people lower then him on the Blood Knight Ranks, and his friends. He doesn't have a good solid mental fortitude when it comes to dealing with his close ones. He is a real hot-head when his fuse it lit up, easily manipulated when he is flared up. His choice of attire Leather seems good for speed, and despite that minor plating hooked up the leather it doesn't overall protect him well enough when he actually gets hurt.

Affiliation: Blood Knights, Horde, Really close to the Ebon Blade

Bio:
Pre-Warcraft - Warcraft 1:
Rath was born into a High elven Warrior family called Bloodmoon. They were known as the Bloodmoon because of their ferocity, and magically ability to enhance their physical capabilities. Moments right after the First War, the Bloodmoon family was slaughtered because of the use of forbidden magic. They left the new generation newborn toddlers or so younger, alive hoping they'll be different from their last generations. The children were casted into Orphanages all over Quel'Thalas. Rath being amongst them was casted at the Fairbreeze Village.

Rath was picked up by a Swordmaster who saw great potential in him. All through the First War, Swordmaster Iruduk tested every ounce of Rath's potential. Rath saw him as a father figure. At a young age Rath took second in a sword dueling tournament in Southern Quel'Thalas near the borders of Lordaeron. He discovered the nature of mana within him when he accidently stumbled onto the Runestone. The Runestone reacted and sparked around Rath. Rath being curious began to bend the mana sparks and from there he trained his ability to control/bend mana. At the end of the First War, Rath left his master in search of his own path. What was he really? A Soldier? A Mage? Or perhaps a Battlemage. During his travels he met a beautiful human female. He almost mistook her as an elf. Her name was Faith, and as time went on they began to talk, and soon love.

Second War:
Rath was Faith's fiance during the beginning of the Second War. When the orcs invaded Southern Quel'Thalas, the village of near the borders was ram shacked by the Horde. His love was killed during the ransacking. Rath fought back with a vegenace of Thousand Suns, but yet kills after kills couldn't satisfy his sorrow. He retreated to Silvermoon with the retreating forces. During the months on the defensive. Rath volunteered to learn the ways of the Shadow. These ways were more openly to be used on urban ground, or on the Battlefield. He used the Second War as his trial ground as he fought through the Orcish Invasion. Rath declined to go into the Dark Portal as he chose to help rebuild Quel'Thalas. He began to think love was too harsh for him as his mind started began to convert into Alexithymia.

Third War:
Rath was living peacefully at a Sword Training school. During Hellscream's geurilla warfare against the Alliance. Rath began tinkering more, and more with mana during these years. During the Scourge Invasion, Rath was selected to become part of an Elite Rag-Tag team, The Rising Sun. Using his skills as a swordmaster, and a assassin figure he assassinated many Scourge leader figures, but it seemed that they kept on coming, and coming. The Rising Sun was soon broken as the Battle of Quel'thalas was hopeless on the Elven Forces. Rath was then assigned to Sunstrider Isles, to help evacuate civilian, and soldiers alike. When the Scourge pressed onto the isle, he fought again to save many people lives like any other soldier will do.

Rath traveled with Kael'thas small caravan to Dalaran to meet up with Garithos. Rath didn't like Garithos for his racism, before even joining Garitho's Army he left Kael'thas band back to Quel'thalas. During his travels to Ghostlands. He met up with an early member of the Scarlet Crusade. His name was Corsk Lightforge. Corsk kep Rath out of trouble during the ending of the Third Wars. Soon they had to split up, as Corsk lead Rath to Greenwoods Path. They said their goodbyes and went their seperate ways.He met up with Lor'themar's forces that was fighting back the Scourge Remnant in Quel'Thalas.

World of Warcraft:
Rath was part of Lor'themar, and Halduron's forces to retake Quel'Thalas. Rath was becoming desperate from the Arcane addiction. Rath had the will to keep going despite the addiction

(Half-Way Done)

[Vadoor]

You could improve the bio portion by taking his appearance out and giving it its own little section. Overall it is good I would just try to clean it up a little.

[ELYPOP]

Okay, I see a few issues here, so I'll address them. Firstly, he can't be a Blood Knight if he's a Rogue/Assassin. One is literally a Light bending Paladin, whereas the other is a person based on stealth and trickery. The Blood Knight Order solely consists of Paladins, no Rogues or anything.

Also, regarding his history, you seem to completely ignore the Third War. Give his experience during that encounter, and what he thought of the Scourge. Also, how did he survive it? How did he deal with his severed connection to the Sunwell? Did he begin siphoning from fel crystals like the rest of the Blood Elves? How did he deal with the High Elves' "betrayal"?

Now, when he does travel to Outland, he must have been allied with Kael'thas. When Mu'ru was sent to Silvermoon, did your character accompany it? Were you okay with Kael'thas even allying with Illidan and Vashj? Or, did you remain in Outland, and leave Kael'thas at a later time?

And lastly, what did your character think of Kael'thas's betrayal, and allying to the Burning Legion? And what are his thoughts about the new Sunwell? Was he happy with it being restored? Has he even taken part in more recent events, like the fall of the Lich King? Or, did he just remain in Silvermoon City?

Lastly, as Vadoor said, give his appearance its own special section.


Just consider these, and I'll be looking forward to an updated Bio.

[Khorianas]

Hi everybody, my own Bio has not been reviewed yet, but since Bloodelf and Blood Knight lore is one of my favorite topics i would like to give a comment.

I don't really see an issue with a former rogue/blade master joining the order. There are various backgrounds possible, since in the orders early days (pre sunwell) it was decided by dueling to the death who was allowed to join.
But if someone reaches the Master rank inside the order within the few years given time, I would assume that they first of all had to stop training/maintaining their former skills to master the light bending and secondly would be expected to fight like a Blood Knight since the order is very proud of the ability to bend the light.
So if you want your character to openly wear the Blood Knights colors, and obtain a rank past Adept i would suggest you have to fight and behave like a Paladin.
But if you are sent on a secretive mission like aiding the Forsaken in Gilneas or something like that, you may leave your Blood Knight colors at home and act like an assassin if you wish.

If a concept like that was your intention I don't see any problem with the character, except for what Elyaan said, the whole Kael'thas incident really should be commented. (that reminds me i should comment that in my bio to *whistles innocently*)

Apart from that a really interesting character

[ELYPOP]

Hi everybody, my own Bio has not been reviewed yet, but since Bloodelf and Blood Knight lore is one of my favorite topics i would like to give a comment.

I don't really see an issue with a former rogue/blade master joining the order. There are various backgrounds possible, since in the orders early days (pre sunwell) it was decided by dueling to the death who was allowed to join.
But if someone reaches the Master rank inside the order within the few years given time, I would assume that they first of all had to stop training/maintaining their former skills to master the light bending and secondly would be expected to fight like a Blood Knight since the order is very proud of the ability to bend the light.
So if you want your character to openly wear the Blood Knights colors, and obtain a rank past Adept i would suggest you have to fight and behave like a Paladin.
But if you are sent on a secretive mission like aiding the Forsaken in Gilneas or something like that, you may leave your Blood Knight colors at home and act like an assassin if you wish.

If a concept like that was your intention I don't see any problem with the character, except for what Elyaan said, the whole Kael'thas incident really should be commented. (that reminds me i should comment that in my bio to *whistles innocently*)

Apart from that a really interesting character

If think you misunderstood what I said. I said that he can't be a Rogue/Assasin within the Order, since it's for Paladins. Sure he can convert to a Paladin, but he can't act as any another class and be called a Blood Knight.

But yea, everything else you've said is perfect. I'll have a look over your bio in a few moments.

[Rivalfenix]

Thanks guys. Gonna update. I just wanted a quick summary. But aight.
-Third War
-His view on Kaelthas going into Outland
-What happens during the Third War
-Looks on a different Category

Well for the Rogue Blood Knight thing. Yeah I'll clarify that up a lot more. Going to be hard though ha ha. But I do consider a Blood Knight (or Sunwalker) a Totally different class set apart from a paladin. So i guess his Rank can just be Specialist because of his ability to control mana, and light lil bit more advance then other Knights.
Reason for Paladin/Rogue Concept - DnD there's a class called the Shadowbane Inquisitors, basically Paladins that can stealth and hunt down demons, heretics, and etc. etc. (I think Scarlet CRusade would be dangrous with them.) And I want him to be a speed base fighter. But yes I will try to fix up on that concept. Thanks for Feedback <3